My Softest Light

Wherever we lived, summer meant riding in the car ~ red clay, Georgia bound My excitement grew with each state trapped in Daddy’s rearview mirror. Macon was relative love ground where smiles were not lost but found. I always sat in the back seat, heart viewing you, knowing before dark came I would hear your dear accent say my name. After dark, I knew I would stay with you ~ not brother, or little sister, Pooh, but me, snuggle loved in your bed and you would care about all I thought and said. Sweet, Grannie, for decades now I have missed you I can still hear your voice, see your eyes twinkle and tonight I embrace space seeking your dear, fresh powder presence gentle words of love’s selfless attention turned to silence way too soon ... in my heart we still share love Grannie, you were the softest light in my youth Could you but rock me secure once more this night – sing your comfort songs – gently hush my grown fright - safe, sweet Grannie arms would shield me in love’s truth I still talk to her close my eyes with hopes she hears ~~ she believed in me ~ ~ her image never leaves me my adult still craves her - here
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Ashley Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 7:24 PM
Dear CayCay, I was drawn in so close by the wistful, whisper tone of your poignant poem. I was deeply touched by the potent, yet tender, power of your golden poetic pen as it illuminated an intimate portrait of you and your sweet Grannie. Congratulations for your success in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes my dear poet friend.. ~Susan
Toney Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 12:18 AM
CayCay, your heartfelt tribute to your “sweet, Grannie” is endearing. A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 15 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. We’re well past the halfway point! Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 16 has already started. You can find your current standing in my Mile 15 blog post.
Famuyiwa Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 10:55 PM
What a sweet write, pleasant to read as well and a reminisce of how we all miss our grandmas. I think they were usually sweet when they were mamas but are even sweeter when they become grandmas.
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 10:29 PM
I hope this is one I had favved because it IS one of your very best, Caycay. Congrats on your recent win with it.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 12:45 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great memories are the best. Have a wonderful day.........
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 3:54 PM
A beautiful moving poem CaCay deserving of your win. I never had a grandmother. Both died young. I wish I had experienced that kind of comforting love. Congratulations! : ) xxoo
Inman Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 11:36 AM
This is touching and so beautifully written CayCay. She sounds like a very special person.
Arowolo Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 2:49 AM
Wonderful and interesting piece,Caycay...congrats on your well deserved win...
Haight Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 3:06 PM
So lovely and heartfelt, CayCay...brought warmth to my heart of my own longings for my dear grandma. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
Leiser Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 2:11 PM
Congrats on your top win, CayCay! Such love for your grandma is aptly described here! Mine was special, too :)
La France Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 10:40 AM
CayCay, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful write ~
Chansarkar Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 9:53 AM
Beautiful and emotional CayCay!Congrats to you!
Callus Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 9:30 AM
So heartfelt and touching, CayCay. I only remember one g'ma; she died when I was still quite young, but I know that she loved me a lot. ~ Congratulations on placing first ... very much deserved. Regards // paul
Hay Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Such an endearing poem and i love the presentation too, congrats, Laura.
Scars Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 7:34 AM
CayCay- oh wow lady, this is intensely written with so much depth...congrats on your top placement! :)-luloo
Gupta Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 12:13 AM
Congratulations on your win for your beautiful write ....
Roper Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 9:04 PM
Great write, CayCay, congratulations on your win! Hugs
Krampe Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 8:52 PM
Congrats on your win, Caycay. What a beautiful tribute to your grandma. I miss mine very much. Agnes
Warrior Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 7:53 PM
Grandma's are one the world's greatest treasures...if not the best...I would often call her mom...great write my friend...god bless...^WW^
Warrior Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 7:56 PM
And Congrats!!!....CayCay...^WW^
Richards Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 7:48 PM
This is so sad, so sweet, and filled with the love that I also felt for my own grandmother. "My adult still craves her here".......what a tender, bittersweet line that is :) Congratulations on your win!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 6:19 PM
This is so beautiful CayCay! I never had a grandmother in my life. You are so fortunate to have known that love. Congratulations on your outstanding first place! This poem is so deserving of the honor! ; ) 7
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 5:42 PM
Always miss the love of a Grandmother! Nice! Congrats!
Wigley Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 8:04 PM
Warm, lovely, full of longing. A fine write, CayCay for a tricky contest. I'm sure you will fare well. Viv x
White Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 11:49 AM
"My adult still c r a v e s her - here" This is so beautiful. x Darren.
Kendrick Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 10:57 AM
We do want that assurance in our weak moments that only a parent or grandparent could give..Someday we will again be reunited and have that total assurance at we all need..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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