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My Sky

When I saw the yellow sunrise,
I could not believe my eyes.
I looked up to the bright pretty sky,
I saw you looking back and I wanted to cry.
With a pretty background of blue,
Big fluffy white clouds are everywhere.
I see many shapes even a cute little bear.
As the day now comes to an end,
all your pretty colors will blend.
Your bright sky pink,
just gave me a huge wink.
The deep royal purple color,
made me feel like a real scholar.
The orange tangerine wave,
went throughout the sky I wanted to save.
It was followed by red,
now guess it is time for me to go to bed.
Date Written: 8/17/2021
9 Place
Kaleidoscope Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 8/23/2021 9:33:00 AM
Opening the eyes till going to bed - Beautiful! Congratulations on your win!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2021 10:36:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like write. It is an honor to have a win. Have a great/blessed~~day.........................
Date: 8/18/2021 6:44:00 PM
Paula, I think you are making the sky your own personal playground. Good for you. Just save a little corner for me, ok?!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2021 11:55:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this pretty sky write. How about if I gave you half of my personal playground??? Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend.........................
Date: 8/18/2021 10:31:00 AM
I am an eternal sky watcher. Known to run towards a hue, I’ll make who’s ever with me run to see it too ;), Enjoyed this poem thoroughly! xomo
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/18/2021 11:13:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this pretty sky write. I love the sky day and night. Have a great/blessed day..................................
Date: 8/17/2021 10:36:00 PM
I liked the way you handled this contest. Painting the colours of the sky, nice one.Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/18/2021 9:33:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this sky write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great/blessed day...........

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