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My Silent Call

Silently I watch, like The spiders in you room. Your neurotic possession Once held so tightly, now The object of my Desire. My ignorance now Your bliss Come back to me My bluebird So that I may stop watching And start feeling.

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Mark Peterson

Date: 7/22/2014 11:04:00 AM

A very thoughtful, entreating plea, written so carefully and quietly, yet with the impact of tropical thunder. Welcome to the soup, I look forward to more rhyme...hopefully soon.

Skat A

Date: 6/10/2013 8:59:00 PM

awesome............. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2013 10:12:00 AM

This is a good poem No Name, hope she fly's back into your arms. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda

Kim Van Breda

Date: 6/3/2013 8:28:00 AM

Beautiful poem of mixed emotions and descriptive use of words. Welcome to P/Soup

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/3/2013 4:02:00 AM

- S.W. Welcome to P-Soup - You have posted is touching and well written poem. - I like it. - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us. - You are welcome to read / comments some of my poems if you want. - Good luck, look forward to more poems from you in the future. - Have a beautiful day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)