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My shoes have traveled miles of roads Their soles are worn quite thin Struggling with this heavy load I carry deep within Beyond repair, no longer shine Scuffed with many stains It's mostly been an uphill climb Some sunny days, some rain A little big when they were new With ample room to grow This green stain here on my left shoe Was puberty's first blow Those salt stains there, that's sweat and tears Still damp from being heartbroken They've darkened some throughout the years Old wounds that were reopened There are no stains from happy tears I finally understood Obviously they disappeared Right after parenthood All these scuff marks 'long the sides Well they're from clumsiness From times I fell and hurt my pride A reminding subsequence They've danced and skated, loved and dated Walked a few high wires Death devastated, been mismated Even walked through hell's hot fires It's said that one can tell a lot By looking at one's shoes Until you've worn these shoes I've got You really have no clue an original poem by Daniel Turner NOT FOR CONTEST

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Date: 8/13/2019 11:57:00 AM
danced and skated, loved and dated Walked a few high wires...wonderful words...truth... Excellent write. Ann
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Date: 3/22/2017 11:14:00 PM
Hi Daniel I have just read your poem and it is truly amazing. I am struggling to understand the concept with the metaphor of the shoes. Would you please explain a deeper understanding of your poem as I would love to read it on a deeper level. Thank you!
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Date: 7/9/2017 12:16:00 PM
Sorry I took so long to get back to you, Amber. Basically the poem is about all I have been through, good and bad, in my life. The shoes represent my life. It also has the message not to judge people. We can not possibly know the trials and tribulations of another, regardless of our own experiences, because we are all different.
Date: 9/19/2016 7:11:00 PM
Hey Daniel must have missed this one, it's new on the best list, it's really good to see you are on a roll, muse is on cruise control again great! This is excellent work, as is always the case, I always enjoy your writing, no wonder it's always on the leaderboard. An easy 7
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Date: 9/19/2016 8:32:00 PM
Thank you, John. You are too kind. I appreciate all of your support and especially your friendship. Take care my friend!
Date: 9/13/2016 11:14:00 AM
Daniel, this shoe saga is a delight. I hung onto every line. I have shoes that have experienced at least some of what you describe, so I can identify with part of what you've been through (bearing my sole/soul). Wonderful, thought-provoking poem. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 9/18/2016 9:31:00 PM
Thank you, Paul for the wonderful comments. I always enjoy your friendly visits. Sorry I took so long to respond. I don't always get prompts like we used to.
Date: 9/7/2016 12:25:00 PM
I really love this poem, Daniel. It is just filled with imagery and illustrates the point that we should not judge others because we haven't "walked in their shoes".
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Date: 9/18/2016 9:30:00 PM
Thank you, Carole. I appreciate your kind comments and friendly visits. judging people is forcing your prejudices on others. Stereotyping anyone for any reason is just wrong.
Date: 9/2/2016 9:04:00 PM
This is very good and true I think so very much like you I can relate which I can do We can never wear the other's shoe It's 10 from me!
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Date: 9/2/2016 10:56:00 PM
Thank you Franklin. Your are too kind. i really appreciate you stopping by. It's always a pleasure.
Date: 8/31/2016 2:59:00 PM
Daniel, very nicely said. Great allegory of life.
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Date: 8/31/2016 4:24:00 PM
Thank you Mrs Beverly. I appreciate your support and it was nice of you to stop by and leave a smile:)
Date: 8/30/2016 6:14:00 AM
I Love this one Dan
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Date: 8/30/2016 6:01:00 PM
Thanks Jerry:) That cheers me up!
Date: 8/29/2016 10:04:00 AM
You've brought to life a journey of shoes, there for us in all we do, taking us down the roads of happiness, sadness and the in-between. I love what you did with this theme! :) Well done, Daniel 1
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Date: 8/29/2016 1:42:00 PM
Thank you Mrs Carrie. Telling it is the easy part. Living it, well you know, we do what we have to do.
Date: 8/27/2016 8:26:00 PM
Hi Daniel : It's like your shoes have a genesis of their own. Great Write!
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Date: 8/27/2016 9:12:00 PM
Thank you, Ralph. I'm just glad they don't smell bad. Lol I appreciate you stopping by and leaving a smile.
Date: 8/27/2016 1:50:00 PM
You put soul in those shoes Daniel...well written
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Date: 8/27/2016 1:57:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph. I must admit, they have been around the block once or twice. I appreciate your time and friendly visits.
Date: 8/26/2016 1:56:00 PM
Amazing write. Love to hear more of the details some day!
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Date: 8/26/2016 4:31:00 PM
Thanks Tom. I'm sure you'll hear it all sooner or later. Lol I appreciate your kindness my friend.
Date: 8/26/2016 9:38:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your work giving a life to those shoes..We all go through much in our lifetime..I hope it was more good than bad.. Daniel, Glad that you enjoyed reading my work...Yes, I am from Georgia.Georgia does have a great history with Alexander H. Stephens being vice-president of the confederacy..Also Robert Loveman was educated in Dalton Ga...It is hot and humid here right now though..thanks so much for dropping by, taking time read and comment..Sara
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Daniel Turner
Date: 8/26/2016 11:47:00 AM
Thank you Mrs Sara. I have spent a lot of time in Georgia. It is a very beautiful state. I love the Savannah area and the coast. I used to be a truck driver for Tyson Foods. So glad you stopped by. You always bring a warm smile. I appreciate your support.
Date: 8/26/2016 9:04:00 AM
Your shoes have been through a lot, Daniel! Life is made up of so many different experiences, and all of us have our own personal ones to recount. I won't offer you my shoes...you'll find that they are of little use:) ~ Regards // paul
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Daniel Turner
Date: 8/26/2016 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Paul. I read about your shoes. I never was very good at chess, though I do like to play. Everybody's shoes has a story to tell. I appreciate you dropping by. It's always a pleasure, sir.
Date: 8/26/2016 8:47:00 AM
Excellent:) No words to express my appreciation:) A 10 for this lovely write:) A sure Fave:)
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Date: 8/26/2016 8:55:00 AM
Thank you, Jo. I really am grateful for all of your support and encouragement. Your kind comments and friendly visits always leave a smile:)
Date: 8/25/2016 11:54:00 PM
Another Turner Classic! Love this!
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Date: 8/26/2016 7:10:00 AM
Sounds like a movie! Lol I watch Turner Classic Movies all of the time:) I love the old black and whites! Thank you so much for dropping in. It's wonderful to see you, Jeannie. I appreciate the pat on the back. You OK?
Date: 8/25/2016 10:43:00 PM
Great write, and read. The idea of shoes telling the story is a good one! Enjoyed reading your work! Memorable. Suzy
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Date: 8/26/2016 7:03:00 AM
Thank you Suzy. I really am glad you dropped in for a visit. I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave a smile . Come back soon.
Date: 8/25/2016 10:23:00 PM
daniel, this is superb poetry... no one can ever walk in your shoes... greeat work; i hope it will be entered in the contest..huggs
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Daniel Turner
Date: 8/26/2016 7:01:00 AM
Aw nette, that's such a sweet thing to say, (I think) Lol You're just too darn nice. Thank you so much, I really appreciate the lovely comments but sorry! When I make myself a promise I really try to keep it. Besides 24 line limit.
Date: 8/25/2016 8:16:00 PM
why don't you put it in the contest? I just noticed there was one called MY shoes. I did not even know it a while ago!!
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Date: 8/25/2016 9:40:00 PM
Too many lines for one:):)
Date: 8/25/2016 7:09:00 PM
Great personification DT...one of my favorite forms...I got home about 330 today feeling surprisingly well..we will see tomorrow when all the pain meds wear off.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 8/25/2016 7:21:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by to let me know. Take care and don't get it wet! I'll check on you tomorrow.
Date: 8/25/2016 4:31:00 PM
Excellent piece my friend...rhyming perfection!
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Date: 8/25/2016 4:51:00 PM
Thanks Mike. I've been taking notes from your poems. Lol I appreciate your time and your kind comments.
Date: 8/25/2016 4:21:00 PM
Ahhh but the lessons you've learned along the way are immeasurable. Daniel, your wisdom can help others as this poem makes clear we should not be so fast to judge, unless we have walked in your shoes. An excellent way to share your experiences through this outstanding poem! 7 ; )
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Daniel Turner
Date: 8/25/2016 4:49:00 PM
Thank you Mrs Connie. You are so right! We should never judge others. You have found a spot in my heart with your endearing remarks. You are a very sweet lady. Thank you for your kindness.
Date: 8/25/2016 3:05:00 PM
GREAT example of an extended metaphor, my friend. VERY well done. Too bad not for a contest!
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Date: 8/25/2016 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. As long as you like it, who needs contests? Lol Thanks for your time and your kind supporting comments. You know is Leos, a soft pat on the head goes a long way. Lol
Date: 8/25/2016 2:28:00 PM
Daniel, I love this amazing poem you wrote. Your 'shoes' have told your life's emotional story so well with such outstanding imagery. A 7 and Fav for me! Sandra
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Date: 8/25/2016 2:48:00 PM
Thank you Mrs Sandra. Once I began writing, it just poured out. I think I could have written a few more verses but I'm not a big fan of long poems. You are always so sweet and supportive of my efforts. Thank you with all of my heart.
Date: 8/25/2016 2:24:00 PM
i enjoyed this very much, daniel, especially the last verse. i can relate to sticking with a comfy pair, but i do think it's time for some new ones, though!
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Date: 8/25/2016 2:46:00 PM
Mrs Ilene. I believe I'm ready for a new pair myself. I just can't bring myself to throw the old ones away. Thank you so much for your time and friendly comments. ..and your smile is to die for! Lol
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