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I am shaken shattered, crushed, lost and forsaken; within the shadow of a broken heart I don't know where to start; to pick up the pieces and put them together, the pieces at my feet will be ruined ever; I hold this grief like a treasure; within a soul broken. I come a lot with wilted roses I have bought. Within the shadow of a broken heart my future bleak and dark. I speak so softly my love that I must leave you, to your engraved name I whisper my weeping adieu; farewell sweet prince- adieu, adieu, I leave you my tear drop. I must find blue skies and nature in shades and hue; within the shadow of a broken heart. Oh, this lost love always a part; I will take you with me on my twisted journey, knowing the path will often be wild and thorny; for I still have to live my story, though to Heaven you flew. _________________________ August 13, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/My Shattered Heart Copyright Protected, ID 19- 1172-974-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, One In Four sponsor, Joseph May, Inspiration #3- Within the shadow of a broken heart Second Place

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Date: 8/26/2019 12:56:00 PM
Back with congrats Constance on a beautiful write, and for a top win!
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Date: 9/12/2019 7:28:00 PM
John thanks for the congratulations and the beautiful
Date: 8/25/2019 12:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Constance -Wiishkobi Ode, for this beautiful sad piece. I always love your creative format and rhyme schemes. Hugs, John
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Date: 9/12/2019 7:27:00 PM
John thanks for the compliment and the congratulations
Date: 8/25/2019 12:22:00 PM
wowowowow, you have to do this form for a contest! That would be awesome. You nailed it with this poem. Loved the rhythm,, rhyme and where you took the theme. Congrats sweet Dear Heart :)-luloo
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Constance La France
Date: 9/12/2019 7:25:00 PM
Lu thanks for the compliment and the congrats
Date: 8/25/2019 9:03:00 AM
A moving write DH..Congrats on your win..
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Constance La France
Date: 9/12/2019 7:24:00 PM
Joseph thanks for the contest and my placement
Date: 8/13/2019 11:39:00 PM
You have me near tears, Dear Heart. Ouch! This is magically sad but we live through it. It never seems possible! Then suddenly a new one is there to love again. By the way best wishes. In love and the contest, both.))) Panagiota
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Constance La France
Date: 8/14/2019 12:06:00 AM
Panagiota, thank you so much for your compassion, I am not quite ready for a new love, maybe I never will be ~
Date: 8/13/2019 11:23:00 PM
Your broken heart and hopeful one too spills onto the pages...lovely write.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/14/2019 12:04:00 AM
Kim, thanks for visiting my poem and commenting, appreciate ~

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