My Secret Vow

within my eyes a whisper
 i dare not to tell
to speak in my mind 
My secret vow
none ending blood rips me inside
tears away the longing  i bear
a secret that i intend to hide
that puts me in a ever ending stare
should i Shout 
or never ending curdles 
pulsating into my veins
ripping me out from the inside
Leaving in never ending pain
pricked by a  thorn in the dead of night
wings that set free taken in flight
no longer my ever ending fate
but to return in haste 
within enemies that crawl
blood tears will fall 
my never ending secret is not to tell
within me i keep my eternal vow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 11:51 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Lisa. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 28, 2009 at 12:49 PM
Interestingly written sad write. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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