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My Secret Vow

within my eyes a whisper i dare not to tell to speak in my mind My secret vow none ending blood rips me inside tears away the longing i bear a secret that i intend to hide that puts me in a ever ending stare should i Shout or never ending curdles pulsating into my veins ripping me out from the inside Leaving in never ending pain pricked by a thorn in the dead of night wings that set free taken in flight no longer my ever ending fate but to return in haste within enemies that crawl blood tears will fall my never ending secret is not to tell within me i keep my eternal vow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/29/2009 11:51:00 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Lisa. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2009 12:49:00 PM
Interestingly written sad write. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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