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My Sanctuary

I am in a sanctuary where people do unspeakable things. Things they would never do with people watching. Things they would not want mothers to know about. There are lots of shadows; the floor feels wet and cushiony. I hear the screech of an eagle, spotting prey. Turn my head to see it swoop down 150 feet from me. Another screech, then silence. Twigs snap as I gingerly look for snakes. Cobwebs get tangled in my hair; It has been awhile since a person was here. I stop at a creek, and look at the pebbles. Wondering if they have ever been touched. I pick through them, select three, pocket them. Wild violets are next to the sandy riverbank; Unseen, unappreciated. I trip over tree roots as I walk to a fallen tree, climb up, and sit. The unparalleled silence calls for reverence. I lie on the log and poke the forest floor With a stick, finding mushrooms and moss. I like the feeling Of the sun on my back in this tiny Break in the forest. I hear a rustling noise, Turn, A deer has been startled. I get a glimpse of her white tail. It is a sanctuary here; my church.

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Date: 11/20/2020 5:24:00 PM
I loved this verse Caren. Silence, Peace, in a magical place. How lovely to be reminded that there are still places that still can be found in these troubled times.... Thank you, take care...Shirley
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/20/2020 5:48:00 PM
I am glad you found this one Shirley. I had forgotten it myself.
Date: 3/5/2018 8:01:00 PM
Absolutely delightful, Caren. Beautifully done.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/6/2018 7:20:00 AM
Sometimes I wonder, does this even make sense? Thanks for always validating my stuff, Line.
Date: 3/5/2018 12:31:00 PM
Hi Caren, Your imagery takes me too, to that special place, "sanctuary". Well done.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/5/2018 12:45:00 PM
Thank you, Paulette. I have lived in the country for over twenty years, and there is nothing like a walk in the woods for me.

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