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My Rescuer

I thought you'd be the one to come and save To rescue me from mouth of open grave I thought you'd be the one to hear my cries The one to gently wipe tears from my eyes I thought I'd find salvation in your arms My refuge from life's troubles and alarms I thought you'd breathe in me the breath of life Revive my heart that's dying due to strife I thought you cared enough to come for me To kill the dragons, changing destiny l thought your love would be my guiding light My soothing comfort in the darkest night My thoughts and wishes centered all on you The dawn of every day brought hope anew, for surely I would live to see your face And be held tightly in your warm embrace I waited, watched, and prayed for you to come To bring a clarity to mind gone numb The minutes, hours, days dragged slowly by It seems you did not hear my burdened sigh You did not come; he came to me instead His shoulder was the place for weary head His arms embraced me when I lost my ground Without his strength, I know I would have drowned He reassures me that he'll never leave He holds me tight when others make me grieve My body he adores with pilgrim hands and over all my wants, he has command He intimately knows my every need His love for me is one you can't exceed He'd give his life for me; I know it's true My foolish heart no longer yearns for you No longer... no, no longer will I wait My rescuer has shown my heaven's gate When he makes love to me, I'm free to soar My eyes see only him and nothing more You come to claim regret won't let you be, but I have found a love that's meant for me My worth and strength of love you could not feel Upon my heart you'll find my lover's seal Eileen Manassian

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Date: 8/9/2024 8:40:00 PM
So romantic...<3
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Date: 7/8/2024 2:17:00 AM
I am so pleased to see your muse back to where it belongs, dear Eileen! You have lost none of your touch. I like the half-way twist ~ the former had it all on a plate, and yet he lost it all. Luckily alternative love arrived to claim an aching heart. ~ Hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/8/2024 7:25:00 AM
Summer school ends in two days. I'm only teaching one class so... I've had some time on my hands. It's good to write. I'll post a new one soon. Thanks for reading and commenting. Hugs
Date: 7/7/2024 7:29:00 AM
Cleverly expressed and emotionally significant. A masterfully rendered piece.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/7/2024 8:28:00 AM
Strange how this poem ended itself. I didn't think of that ending to start with. It was just a poem of angst. Thanks for your kind comments and for being here. Isn't it strange? I have over 300 views and only 3 comments. Something is weird is going on.
Date: 7/6/2024 12:38:00 PM
this is wonderful, eileen! sounds like your no-show person got what he deserved and there's a happy ending after all...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2024 1:37:00 PM
If only we could write the events of our lives as easily as we do poetry... thanks for the visit, dear.
Date: 7/6/2024 5:39:00 AM
Awesome poem Eileen. Sometimes too late really does mean too late. Someone else may step in and take over and then what? You're out dude. Crocodile tears or real ones, remorse is for hesitant fools. I hope you have a great weekend!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2024 1:36:00 PM
Thanks for the visit. Funny how you start a poem with in a certain feeling and then it takes a life all is own... writing is own ending as it were. Nothing like the joy of discovery as you write.

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