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My Rejuvenated Heart

the sun disappeared and was replaced with a dim moonlight eventually, people around me waned from my sight the flowers in full bloom as if they'd turned back to buds as my angry face became darker and darker like a mud children’s laughter faded and stray dogs started to howl I thought, if he'll show up I’ll throw on his face my ice cream bowl where was his promise to meet me at the park? he was a genuine liar! I was flaring up with my nose seemed spark so hurriedly I went back home closing my fist angrily telling myself if I see him, I’ll tell him to kiss the petunia of my daddy one week later, in front of my door he appeared I turned my back but he begged, please forgive me my dear kneeling in front of me, he offered me chocolates and roses trying to explain showing me his forehead with cuts and bruises feeling so confused, I didn’t know what to do look at him with awe or apply to him my knowledge on taekwondo? he sweetly explained that he hates to see me worry after his accident on his way to the park to celebrate our anniversary I hurriedly hugged and kissed him asking also his forgiveness my heart rejuvenated as he whispered , I love you so much my dear princess!
Sept. 11, 2012

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Date: 9/14/2012 7:11:00 PM
I think this is for that one contest on letting the judge have it and then saying nice things? I really like this one. I see some poets are talking directly to the judge of the contest . I think she wanted us to insult her and then flatter her, but I hope she also accepts the insults and flattery to another person as you have done here. You did such a good job of it! Best of luck in the contest, my friend.
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Date: 9/13/2012 9:04:00 PM
I see what you did here... Leonora, i've seen this dim moonlight. sometimes life must brake if we ever want to see it bloom again. My dear friend love always has an explanation... i love the rejuvenating image ... a great poem... xox~pd
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Date: 9/11/2012 11:55:00 AM
i dont think all guys are the same like the taekwondo bit i did karate my slef when younger again nice introspective xx davidscott
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Date: 9/11/2012 11:00:00 AM
Nice poem... good luck in the contest... Terry
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Date: 9/11/2012 10:45:00 AM sweet!!!!!! super like my dear friend...hmmmm Its him? (^____^) another excellent write from you. God bless you always!
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Date: 9/11/2012 10:40:00 AM
Sometimes we get sad, angry and tired. But thankfully it goes away. "Smile and be happy for every day you get" is there is a song called in Norwegian. Very good poem Leonora. Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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