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My Recurring Dream

(after Paul Verlaine) I often have this strange and vivid dream: a woman I don't know - but we're in love. She's not, each time I see her, quite the same, nor truly other: loves me, and knows of my pain. She understands. My heart, to her, is see-through. She can take my cares away. My forehead she refreshes with her pure, kind tears, as only she can do. You say, she's dark? She's blonde, or redhead? I don't care. Her name? I only know it's sweet and low, like names of lovers lost, long years ago. Her eyes? Think of a statue's even stare. Her voice is calm but far-off, laced with dread, the voice of those we've loved, who now are dead.

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Date: 3/11/2017 7:41:00 AM
I can relate to this recurring dream, it sounds so familiar to me...and her eyes they stare with a wisdom beyond years. Good one Michael.
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/11/2017 7:49:00 AM
Thank you, Phil. Your comments are always perceptive and encouraging. It's appreciated.
Date: 3/11/2017 4:40:00 AM
I won't start about the beauty of translating again, you know how I feel about that, and about you :) This is a wonderful sonnet, you don't use the enclosed rhyme here, but have chosen an alternate rhyme scheme. It flows so very naturally. I so love the sadness in this poem, its melancholy. "Et, pour sa vois, lointaine, et calme, et grave elle a // L’inflexion des voix chères qui se sont tues." A dream, recurring, where those we love come back to comfort us.
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Date: 3/11/2017 4:48:00 AM
I'm deeply grateful for the wonderful things you say. This one was posted in order to give you a little "investigation" game. Of course, you tracked the original down in a matter of moments.

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