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My Promise To Her

Born A life A heartbeat Out from the womb Into a new world Held by the hands of love A beautiful little girl She cries, and so do I- ((with joy)) Happy first "Birth" day, my Precious one Now that you have made my dream- come true I promise- to always love you To comfort you when you're sad To be there when in need And try to shield you From all evil Until my Final Day

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 12/30/2023 3:18:00 PM

Lovely write to your baby girl many blessings.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 12/24/2023 2:53:00 PM

That’s so beautiful Charles, a loving Nonet to your daughter from her loving father, a gift for her to treasure forever… Belle

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/17/2023 9:48:00 PM

A lovely dedication to your daughter Charlie. She's so lucky to have such a loving father. Tom

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/17/2023 8:34:00 PM

A tribute well said, Charles. Resounds at every heart's beat well on and yon the first, my friend. Cheers, and best wishes

Deb M

Date: 12/17/2023 11:05:00 AM

Just beautiful Charlie! When your daughter is old enough to read and understand she will love the words her dad wrote for her!! Debx

Silent One

Date: 12/17/2023 7:47:00 AM

Very sweet dedication to your daughter Charlie!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/17/2023 5:48:00 AM

Awwwn, this is such a heartfelt nonet, for the lovely little angel.. Such a soulful and beautiful tapestry of emotions you've painted with your eloquent words here, I'm truly so mesmerized! A beautiful bond between a father and his daughter has been reflected here.. I'm sure this is one of the most evocative takes for the contest, just so gorgeous.. I loved reading this :)