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My Precious

my precious precious thing you are such a part of me my thought, my mind, my dream you who are my sugar and cream you are in the heart of me you fill my thought with special things like cards, poetry, flowers and the moon in my mind there are machinations scheming, plotting imaginations they plan on things that are suppose to work but rare are the scenes that come to birth my dream, my comfort my time spent well in my mind's eye you are under my spell we live in a cottage just me and you a couch, a fireplace a pet or two we often hold hands and give a kiss or a hug any small thing will do a long as it says love my soul has found it's heaven the thoughts in my mind as long as i dream of you i'll be in heaven all the time

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Date: 5/21/2010 2:49:00 PM
You have such a romantic soul.
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Date: 3/28/2010 12:57:00 PM
A beautiful romantic write John. I hope you find your heaven along with lots of happiness. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 3/25/2010 10:29:00 PM
Do you do it on purpose to rhyme with a flow. How do you do it .Only you know. thank you for the dreamy poem.
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Date: 3/25/2010 1:20:00 PM
I'm hoping this will be a lasting relationship for you, dear friend. You deserve some happiness in your life. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/25/2010 12:54:00 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight John.. happy to see u are still posting after your last "goodbye" poem..luv.. "Sweetheart"..this one was very tender... luv..
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Date: 3/24/2010 6:01:00 PM
very nice loved it faleshia
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Date: 3/24/2010 7:59:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning John. Thank you for sharing it. Hoping you have a wonderful day filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2010 9:12:00 PM
A very "loving" poem, Mr. Loving. I love the dream life you described for yourself and your lady. Hope you are doing well, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/23/2010 6:00:00 PM
Great romantic write to that special one..Keep the romantic pen flowing. Sara
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