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My Poetry Soup Recipe

From crispy candied apples, sticky sweets, Derive the base by which my lines accrue; For when pure-love reduced by coal depletes, Then train of thought does simmer heavy rue. As though embittered soup deducted cream: Increasing one but makes another lack - My fossil engine still beholden steam; Thereby, poetic stew remains on track. But, if I’m chef then who’s the engineer? Smart poets pluck the vine whose fruit is loose; As such, sweet compliments, ex-wife austere, For all my wounds and her divine caboose - Because, while pain and sadness garnish me, Her tracks through me conduct my recipe. 1/31/2017

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Date: 2/13/2017 10:49:00 AM
Delicious! :)) Congrats.
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Date: 2/12/2017 4:51:00 AM
Hey there! Congratulations on your placement :) I love your poetry soup recipe, and you're an important ingredient in it.
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Date: 2/12/2017 4:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win - a well composed composition, Phillip. Julia, :)
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Date: 2/11/2017 9:37:00 PM
Great sonnet...Congrats on your win
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Date: 2/11/2017 6:49:00 PM
A sticky sweet soup! Congrats, Phillip!
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Date: 2/1/2017 4:08:00 AM
- A great composed soup, Phillip - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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