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August.17.2023

Tableau Poetry Contest

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My Pleasure Palace- Tableau

In my sweet delta,
My pleasure palace,
With doors opening,
Into my garden,
Where bright blooms blossom,
I sit weaving dreams.

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2023

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August 29, 2023 at 10:45 AM

Dearest Valsa, what serene sweetness of daydreams in a beautiful garden your poem portrays. Your words are like the fragrance that comes from the blooms here! There is such gentleness and an invitation to dream. I almost wrote on this prompt but I could not have done it the justice that you did, my friend! Congratulations on your win, sweet poet! Blessings to you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 21, 2023 at 3:15 AM

- Back with a well deserved congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs

August 20, 2023 at 6:05 PM

I love that last line, Valsa! A lovely write! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

August 20, 2023 at 8:19 AM

LOvely write Valsa, Congrats on your win

Regina Mcintosh

August 19, 2023 at 4:06 AM

Amazing words and I love this because it is me, too. God bless you and your garden. love, Gina

August 17, 2023 at 8:56 PM

How delightful. Sounds like the perfect place for a splendid daydream. Lovely poem Valsa.

Michelle Faulkner

August 17, 2023 at 8:41 PM

'I sit weaving dreams' - so perfectly put, hope you have a special spot for weaving all your dreams~

August 17, 2023 at 6:31 PM

You have managed to create an enchanting and intricately designed ambiance, Valsa.

August 17, 2023 at 4:59 PM

Sweet poetry to my ears, Valsa. You make it dreamy, my friend. Have a blissful day! Bill

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 17, 2023 at 11:31 AM

- A beautiful place for dreams, Valsa - Love it :) - Best wishes :) - hugs

August 17, 2023 at 10:36 AM

You picked up a nice garden and dreams.

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