My Plea

Dad, its been so long since I’ve seen you smile
but I think I know what helps,
you just need to have faith
and follow these four easy steps,

First, understand you don’t have to do this alone
second, asking for help doesn’t mean you’re not strong,
third, remove your fear and cast your doubts away
fourth, get on your knees, close your eyes and pray,

I looked at my son 
who was just as sad as me,
I said I appreciate the advice 
but that isn’t what I need,
besides what in the world 
could I possible say,
it’s been too long 
since I talked to God that way,
He said it doesn’t matter dad
you can start again today,

I looked into his eyes 
and saw a deep sadness on his face,
I knew something needed to change 
so I asked for God’s grace,
I closed my eyes tightly 
and when I saw my wife’s face,
the words started to flow 
from a long-forgotten place,

Heavenly father
I don’t know what to say,
I’m so sad and lonely 
ever since she passed away,
I don’t know what to do anymore 
or how I should proceed,
so I’m going to trust in you 
to show me what I need,
I want to let go of this sadness 
which has been a burden to me,
and follow your guidance 
anywhere it leads,
I need the strength and wisdom 
to help us carry through,
but that can’t come from 
me so I’m calling on you,
to do what only my father in heaven 
has the power to do,

I opened my eyes 
and saw my son smile,
and there was a happiness 
I hadn’t seen in a while,
I pulled him in tight 
and began the prayer again,
and I could feel a change take over
as we both said, Amen.
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Nicole Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 8:12 PM
"You don’t have to do this alone" Very comforting words to hold onto. This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. I am wrapping your thoughts softly around me. ~ Brandy
Kelly Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 7:05 PM
Thank you so much, Brandy. That is very kind of you to say. I'm happy you enjoyed it. I look forward to reading your work soon.
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 4:12 PM
wow, that is a very strong and poignant first poem. Have you written a lot of other things? When I came here 11 years ago, I had written for ten years prior to that, and eventually I filled up my pages with THOSE prior poems plus the newer ones. I hope to see more of you because you look like a guy who knows his stuff. Wonderfully emotive poem, David. By the way, are you a returning member? Your name looks very familiar to me.
Kelly Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 10:17 AM
Hi Andrea. Thank you for reading and for the feedback. I wrote my first poem two years ago as a sarcastic birthday card for a coworker. Turns out I enjoy this medium for story telling. I'll dig into your body of work this weekend. First time member.
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 4:09 PM
Hey, I had seven siblings and was introverted. I only forced myself to be extroverted when I became a teacher and met more and more people through poetry later in life. let me read your first post here now
Daniel Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 7:58 PM
A wonderful and timely help from your side, David, to lead your father into such a needed relationship with the Lord:) welcome to Poetry Soup:)
Kelly Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 11:52 AM
Actually, this was my kiddo leading me there. Children really are the best of us. Thank you for stopping bye, Jo.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 7:17 PM
My dad is suffering like this right now. God bless you. A lovely write.
Kelly Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 8:39 AM
I'm so sorry to hear that. I know its very difficult to push through, but he will endure. Thank you for the kind words!
Cordon Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 3:59 PM
I like how easy it is to read. Tells a simple story about a complicated subject. I enjoyed it.
Kelly Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 5:50 PM
Thank you! I try to avoid sounding like Dr. Seuss as much as possible but sometimes that's just how it sounds in my head.
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