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My Place In the Universe

My place in the universe

Pondering my place in the universe
I wondered,
am I really important?
does my life make a difference
in this earthly existence?

Or am I just a grain of sand
being trampled upon by imaginary
gigantic powers?

As I observe the golden globe's
rise and fall each day, in 
spectacular array, I realize
that my existence is rather
spectacularly insignificant.

Watching the interaction of light sharing, 
the passing of the torch so to speak, 
of the greater luminary to the lesser every night
all for the benefit of us earth dwellers
gives me reason to pause.
 
We are so small, less than grasshoppers
in comparison to our Maker, yet the heavenly skies
in their incomprehensible majesty are designed with us in mind.

Oh now you are having delusions of grandeur you say!
Ok, think about this, 

What purpose does moonlight serve
if not to be observed by us? 

Who needs Divine guidance by day
and by night?

Does the animal kingdom appreciate
it's glory and give praise to it's Maker?

Or does it require a measure of intelligence
and appreciation for the Giver of life, to
be able to see more than celestial lights
reflecting for our benefit?

Can we not see His Wisdom, Love, and Power
shining through these reflective lenses?

Does not our pondering these celestial reflectors
cause a reflex reaction in our interior?

Surely that is the purpose, and as a result,
my quiet reflections, have become earthly
reflections of  heavenly realities.

Just as these heavenly bodies give silent
testimony to their Grand Maker
should I not, as an able bodied human
a vessel of divine light, also give glory
the the one and same Maker?

So I understand, and have come to know
that the reason for all human existence
is to recognize our dependence on
and submit our lives to, and use our lives to give 
glory to our Maker.

My insignificant tongue, can at least
be used to declare God's glory, and by
so doing I am reflecting His love for all
humans.

In other words, my place in the universe
is clearly heard, when I raise my voice
and I rejoice, in praising my Creator...in verse.



John Derek Hamilton
May 09,2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/15/2016 9:42:00 PM
Hey John ... just noticed you replied back to me. Still getting used to the recent changes on the site where they no longer send me email notifications when someone replies to one of my comments ... I'm somewhat in the middle of a writer's block at the moment, but trying my best to overcome!
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John Hamilton
Date: 5/16/2016 7:21:00 AM
Been there too, looking forward to your release ... cuz when it happens look out world! Lol
Date: 5/14/2016 9:38:00 AM
I love your thoughts, many have thought them before and many will to come. Well done! ;)
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John Hamilton
Date: 5/14/2016 12:48:00 PM
Thanks Cas I value your input, visits and comments.
Date: 5/14/2016 2:51:00 AM
Insightful, and well written introspection. Nicely done, sir. -G
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John Hamilton
Date: 5/14/2016 9:22:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and kind comment, very much appreciated!
Date: 5/13/2016 6:11:00 PM
This is perfect as is the One who formed you. Amen and hallelujah! I enjoyed this honouring piece. You do well to praise our Heavenly Father.
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John Hamilton
Date: 5/14/2016 9:17:00 AM
Thanks Richard, spiritual writes are my favourite, this felt good as it flowed, your comments are very much appreciated, all glory to God!
Date: 5/10/2016 8:23:00 PM
"Does not our pondering these celestial reflectors cause a reflex reaction in our interior" ... excellently stated in a poem that makes you think. There seems to be something deep inside us that makes the idea of happy accidents seem out of the question ... but it gets buried in the daily rat race.
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John Hamilton
Date: 5/10/2016 8:56:00 PM
You are right! this rat race is the biggest distraction for most of us that's why removing ourselves from the mundane regularly is so important. Thanks for your visit and comment. Hey we miss your writing not back yet?
Date: 5/10/2016 12:59:00 AM
And what a way to praise the Creator!!!Really enjoyed:) Keep writing your verse:):)
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John Hamilton
Date: 5/10/2016 1:17:00 PM
Thanks Jo these are my favourite writes!
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