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My Perfect Story

The Perfect Story Ingredients.... My Epic Melody! I spread my wings, To carry you into that perfect ride. Allowing you to communicate with my mind. I'll show you what my perfect story would have in it. With the world's enigma not everyone can find. Words twisted with reality and beauty divine The majestic ways to live with fairy tales combined. Show no weakness towards the mercy of my gift. Unleash the lightning, leaving all competition behind. Pierce every word with my gleaming eyes. You'll find yourself in the ebony of the blind. A space passing every constellation with no regrets of return. Assault the moment of the mind with the perfect line.. Expect pain, love, death, and desires that burn. A trap for the follower to sink in. Losing yourself to the evil garden underneath the green fern. Falling in love with the mental link of my imagination. Rising from the ashes that killed every demon in my nations. Rescued by the light of he who rode the wind of fate. Breaking an oath to give every perfect story a- "HAPPY ENDING!" ~SKAT~

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/15/2015 11:25:00 AM

Apart from these clues, I know very little other about you, Skat, except that there is an Irma in the equation! I hope that your love story will thrive and have a happy ending. Hugs // paul

Elsanor Bob

Date: 12/14/2015 1:11:00 PM

Dam.

Verliza Gajeles

Date: 7/20/2015 9:33:00 PM

Wow.. thumbs up to you SKAT :) That was a nice poet :) After reading it, i felt speechless :)

Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Date: 6/1/2015 8:36:00 PM

Interesting poetic discourse on your persona, a tapestry intricately woven in profound lines.

Mel Merrill

Date: 6/13/2014 12:10:00 AM

Just came by to say hello, SKAT. Glad I read this--twice. You never fail to please. Btw, thanks for commenting on my Maiden poem. I've decided to keep her locked up indefinitely lol

Paul Peters

Date: 3/14/2014 7:31:00 AM

Thanks SKAT for commenting on my first poem on the site!

Larry Berdoo

Date: 3/10/2014 12:17:00 AM

Thanks SKAT, for more kind words, I'm just having good clean fun with others. We are both very lucky to have good understanding mates. My wife and I, enjoy one anothers company, as you and your hubby........Write on! SKAT

Darren Watson

Date: 1/30/2014 7:49:00 AM

I was sure this was going to be a Mary Poppins type tale but it surprised me . You have a very active imagination and it is beautifully expressed.

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 10/30/2013 7:55:00 AM

Alwaz on it Skat,love your style soooo grand and deep. Keep the fire burning! Thanks a lot for your congratulatory messages,I really appreciate dearest one. Big hugs and warm kisses. Bob- based on belief

Joseph May

Date: 9/19/2013 8:12:00 AM

good write Skat....hugs

... Gigno

Date: 7/15/2013 12:26:00 AM

!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 9:44:00 AM

no! pd

Kristelle Antonette Clerigo

Date: 4/20/2013 12:41:00 AM

I love this one! :) such a good work!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/18/2013 1:32:00 AM

I'd love to be in this story you speak of. A place where words are more accepted and cherished, rather than avoided so much in nowadays. Your imagination excelled in this one Skat, a pleasure to read!

Len Gasun

Date: 2/16/2013 10:05:00 PM

Hello, my dearest Skat! Stopping by to say HI and sending you my warmest hugs! How are you? I hope you're always doing fine! I'm missing you, too! Well, I'm so happy to read this perfect poem and story of yours! I love it so much! You're so talented poet too! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great day! love always and forever, Leonora

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/3/2012 6:03:00 PM

What a great description of what we are all doing when we post our words in hopes of making connections across time and space. Beautiful descriptive poem. Your wings have truly gapped the distance with ease.

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/1/2011 8:37:00 AM

This is lovely.. :)

Farrah Veronica Sinha

Date: 6/1/2011 2:21:00 AM

Magnificent piece of work You are a brilliant poet..whats the story behind the name SKAT??

Cory Long

Date: 5/27/2011 6:52:00 PM

this was awesome nice job! cory

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/26/2011 6:19:00 AM

Everyone loves a happy ending...not always attainable in life, but a writer can give his or her story any ending they wish! This is a good, creative write. Some good ingredients here, and nicely put together too! Regards, Robert.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2011 3:01:00 PM

Hi, Skat, just dropping by to say hi, miss you!

Christopher Marcum

Date: 2/5/2011 5:21:00 PM

smile -- and i too, love happy endings as i also do, joyful and passionates, love stories ~ i am surely hoping that, "Your Many Splendours," shall somehow find the time to bless Us all with more of, "Your Beauties," fabulous canvas' of uniquely gifted art my dear; and Yes, but another fave amid the faves, from, "A Beautiful Light." ~ love, Always, christopher ~

Christopher Marcum

Date: 2/5/2011 5:14:00 PM

smile -- such an Astonishingly Beautiful journey winding through the constellations of both, intrigue and fascination my dear, "Gifted & Precious, 'Beautiful Skat*.'" ~ never am i disappointed when my eyes behold, "Your Beautifies," colourful canvas' of creations my dear for, they always seem hold these, radiant hues amid enchantings picturesque views; be they black or white, sour sweet or bright -- cont:)

Audrey Castaneda

Date: 1/10/2011 5:22:00 PM

perfect' audree

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2011 7:46:00 AM

Interesting work..Wonder if there is a contest going on this one..Your presence at my work brightened my cloudy, icy, snowny, cold winter day..Sara