Skat A Poet Free verse

My Perfect Story

The Perfect Story


Ingredients.... My Epic Melody!

 
I spread my wings, 

To carry you into that perfect ride.

Allowing you to communicate with my mind.

I'll show you what my perfect story would have in it.

With the world's enigma not everyone can find.

Words twisted with reality and beauty divine

The majestic ways to live with fairy tales combined.

Show no weakness towards the mercy of my gift.

Unleash the lightning, leaving all competition behind.

Pierce every word with my gleaming eyes.

You'll find yourself in the ebony of the blind.

A space passing every constellation with no regrets of return.

Assault the moment of the mind with the perfect line..

Expect pain, love, death, and desires that burn.

A trap for the follower to sink in.

Losing yourself to the evil garden underneath the green fern. 

Falling in love with the mental link of my imagination.

Rising from the ashes that killed every demon in my nations.

Rescued by the light of he who rode the wind of fate.

Breaking an oath to give every perfect story a-

 "HAPPY ENDING!"

 
~SKAT~

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Paul Callus December 15, 2015 at 11:25 AM Apart from these clues, I know very little other about you, Skat, except that there is an Irma in the equation! I hope that your love story will thrive and have a happy ending. Hugs // paul

Elsanor Bob December 14, 2015 at 1:11 PM Dam.

Verliza Gajeles July 20, 2015 at 9:33 PM Wow.. thumbs up to you SKAT :) That was a nice poet :) After reading it, i felt speechless :)

Cynthia Buhain-Baello June 1, 2015 at 8:36 PM Interesting poetic discourse on your persona, a tapestry intricately woven in profound lines.

Mel Merrill June 13, 2014 at 12:10 AM Just came by to say hello, SKAT. Glad I read this--twice. You never fail to please. Btw, thanks for commenting on my Maiden poem. I've decided to keep her locked up indefinitely lol

Paul Peters March 14, 2014 at 7:31 AM Thanks SKAT for commenting on my first poem on the site!

Larry Berdoo March 10, 2014 at 12:17 AM Thanks SKAT, for more kind words, I'm just having good clean fun with others. We are both very lucky to have good understanding mates. My wife and I, enjoy one anothers company, as you and your hubby........Write on! SKAT

Darren Watson January 30, 2014 at 7:49 AM I was sure this was going to be a Mary Poppins type tale but it surprised me . You have a very active imagination and it is beautifully expressed.

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu October 30, 2013 at 7:55 AM Alwaz on it Skat,love your style soooo grand and deep. Keep the fire burning! Thanks a lot for your congratulatory messages,I really appreciate dearest one. Big hugs and warm kisses. Bob- based on belief

Joseph May September 19, 2013 at 8:12 AM good write Skat....hugs

... Gigno July 15, 2013 at 12:26 AM !!!

Poet Destroyer A July 7, 2013 at 9:44 AM no! pd

Kristelle Antonette Clerigo April 20, 2013 at 12:41 AM I love this one! :) such a good work!

Timothy Hicks April 18, 2013 at 1:32 AM I'd love to be in this story you speak of. A place where words are more accepted and cherished, rather than avoided so much in nowadays. Your imagination excelled in this one Skat, a pleasure to read!

Len Gasun February 16, 2013 at 10:05 PM Hello, my dearest Skat! Stopping by to say HI and sending you my warmest hugs! How are you? I hope you're always doing fine! I'm missing you, too! Well, I'm so happy to read this perfect poem and story of yours! I love it so much! You're so talented poet too! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great day! love always and forever, Leonora

Richard Lamoureux December 3, 2012 at 6:03 PM What a great description of what we are all doing when we post our words in hopes of making connections across time and space. Beautiful descriptive poem. Your wings have truly gapped the distance with ease.

Dinda Minardi June 1, 2011 at 8:37 AM This is lovely.. :)

Farrah Veronica Sinha June 1, 2011 at 2:21 AM Magnificent piece of work You are a brilliant poet..whats the story behind the name SKAT??

Cory Long May 27, 2011 at 6:52 PM this was awesome nice job! cory

Zzzzz Zzzzz May 26, 2011 at 6:19 AM Everyone loves a happy ending...not always attainable in life, but a writer can give his or her story any ending they wish! This is a good, creative write. Some good ingredients here, and nicely put together too! Regards, Robert.

Andrea Dietrich March 20, 2011 at 3:01 PM Hi, Skat, just dropping by to say hi, miss you!

Christopher Marcum February 5, 2011 at 5:21 PM smile -- and i too, love happy endings as i also do, joyful and passionates, love stories ~ i am surely hoping that, "Your Many Splendours," shall somehow find the time to bless Us all with more of, "Your Beauties," fabulous canvas' of uniquely gifted art my dear; and Yes, but another fave amid the faves, from, "A Beautiful Light." ~ love, Always, christopher ~

Christopher Marcum February 5, 2011 at 5:14 PM smile -- such an Astonishingly Beautiful journey winding through the constellations of both, intrigue and fascination my dear, "Gifted & Precious, 'Beautiful Skat*.'" ~ never am i disappointed when my eyes behold, "Your Beautifies," colourful canvas' of creations my dear for, they always seem hold these, radiant hues amid enchantings picturesque views; be they black or white, sour sweet or bright -- cont:)

Audrey Castaneda January 10, 2011 at 5:22 PM perfect' audree

Sara Kendrick January 10, 2011 at 7:46 AM Interesting work..Wonder if there is a contest going on this one..Your presence at my work brightened my cloudy, icy, snowny, cold winter day..Sara

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