My Perfect Story

The Perfect Story


Ingredients.... My Epic Melody!

 
I spread my wings, 

To carry you into that perfect ride.

Allowing you to communicate with my mind.

I'll show you what my perfect story would have in it.

With the world's enigma not everyone can find.

Words twisted with reality and beauty divine

The majestic ways to live with fairy tales combined.

Show no weakness towards the mercy of my gift.

Unleash the lightning, leaving all competition behind.

Pierce every word with my gleaming eyes.

You'll find yourself in the ebony of the blind.

A space passing every constellation with no regrets of return.

Assault the moment of the mind with the perfect line..

Expect pain, love, death, and desires that burn.

A trap for the follower to sink in.

Losing yourself to the evil garden underneath the green fern. 

Falling in love with the mental link of my imagination.

Rising from the ashes that killed every demon in my nations.

Rescued by the light of he who rode the wind of fate.

Breaking an oath to give every perfect story a-

 "HAPPY ENDING!"

 
~SKAT~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 12/15/2015 11:25:00 AM
Apart from these clues, I know very little other about you, Skat, except that there is an Irma in the equation! I hope that your love story will thrive and have a happy ending. Hugs // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 12/14/2015 1:11:00 PM
Dam.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/20/2015 9:33:00 PM
Wow.. thumbs up to you SKAT :) That was a nice poet :) After reading it, i felt speechless :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2015 8:36:00 PM
Interesting poetic discourse on your persona, a tapestry intricately woven in profound lines.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/13/2014 12:10:00 AM
Just came by to say hello, SKAT. Glad I read this--twice. You never fail to please. Btw, thanks for commenting on my Maiden poem. I've decided to keep her locked up indefinitely lol
Login to Reply
Date: 3/14/2014 7:31:00 AM
Thanks SKAT for commenting on my first poem on the site!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/10/2014 12:17:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, for more kind words, I'm just having good clean fun with others. We are both very lucky to have good understanding mates. My wife and I, enjoy one anothers company, as you and your hubby........Write on! SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 1/30/2014 7:49:00 AM
I was sure this was going to be a Mary Poppins type tale but it surprised me . You have a very active imagination and it is beautifully expressed.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/30/2013 7:55:00 AM
Alwaz on it Skat,love your style soooo grand and deep. Keep the fire burning! Thanks a lot for your congratulatory messages,I really appreciate dearest one. Big hugs and warm kisses. Bob- based on belief
Login to Reply
Date: 9/19/2013 8:12:00 AM
good write Skat....hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 7/15/2013 12:26:00 AM
!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/7/2013 9:44:00 AM
no! pd
Login to Reply
Date: 4/20/2013 12:41:00 AM
I love this one! :) such a good work!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/18/2013 1:32:00 AM
I'd love to be in this story you speak of. A place where words are more accepted and cherished, rather than avoided so much in nowadays. Your imagination excelled in this one Skat, a pleasure to read!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/16/2013 10:05:00 PM
Hello, my dearest Skat! Stopping by to say HI and sending you my warmest hugs! How are you? I hope you're always doing fine! I'm missing you, too! Well, I'm so happy to read this perfect poem and story of yours! I love it so much! You're so talented poet too! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great day! love always and forever, Leonora
Login to Reply
Date: 12/3/2012 6:03:00 PM
What a great description of what we are all doing when we post our words in hopes of making connections across time and space. Beautiful descriptive poem. Your wings have truly gapped the distance with ease.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2011 8:37:00 AM
This is lovely.. :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2011 2:21:00 AM
Magnificent piece of work You are a brilliant poet..whats the story behind the name SKAT??
Login to Reply
Date: 5/27/2011 6:52:00 PM
this was awesome nice job! cory
Login to Reply
Date: 5/26/2011 6:19:00 AM
Everyone loves a happy ending...not always attainable in life, but a writer can give his or her story any ending they wish! This is a good, creative write. Some good ingredients here, and nicely put together too! Regards, Robert.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/20/2011 3:01:00 PM
Hi, Skat, just dropping by to say hi, miss you!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/5/2011 5:21:00 PM
smile -- and i too, love happy endings as i also do, joyful and passionates, love stories ~ i am surely hoping that, "Your Many Splendours," shall somehow find the time to bless Us all with more of, "Your Beauties," fabulous canvas' of uniquely gifted art my dear; and Yes, but another fave amid the faves, from, "A Beautiful Light." ~ love, Always, christopher ~
Login to Reply
Date: 2/5/2011 5:14:00 PM
smile -- such an Astonishingly Beautiful journey winding through the constellations of both, intrigue and fascination my dear, "Gifted & Precious, 'Beautiful Skat*.'" ~ never am i disappointed when my eyes behold, "Your Beautifies," colourful canvas' of creations my dear for, they always seem hold these, radiant hues amid enchantings picturesque views; be they black or white, sour sweet or bright -- cont:)
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2011 5:22:00 PM
perfect' audree
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2011 7:46:00 AM
Interesting work..Wonder if there is a contest going on this one..Your presence at my work brightened my cloudy, icy, snowny, cold winter day..Sara
Login to Reply
12
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter