MY PALMS WOUNDED IN BATTLE

rain taunted the mood one drop at a time like sand through the hourglass no snow in no man’s land only poured out on top of decrepit heads with expectations over said heads it’s snowing too deep my knees are weak where is the honor of contentment when buried six feet under the flood… I float above the fray holding my hands out as oil fills my cups - my palms wounded in battle, H I S I’m forever HIS I am content oil and water don’t mix the Holy Spirit wins
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Elliott Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 2:34 PM
Outstandingly beauteous Christian poem, Kim. I hope your first week of 2024 is going well. xx
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January 4, 2024 at 6:30 AM
Thank you, Gina! Things stay hectic until the 3rd. Taking a breath but steaming full year ahead. Happy New Year, sweet one!
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December 31, 2023 at 12:01 AM
Amen Kim, Gods blessings to you.'
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 6:13 AM
Thank you, Joe! Happy New Year!
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December 30, 2023 at 9:21 AM
Beautiful soulful rejoicing poem , : ). We know it by the Spirit God has placed within that foretold about how God would come dwell unto the hearts, minds and souls, I will be there people and they will be a family of the Living God that has breathed the Holy Spirit within
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 9:39 AM
Thank you, Stephan for praising along! Happy New Year 2024! God bless you!
One Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 6:14 AM
Your poem portrays you strong faith, which has helped you in adversity and overcome times when you have felt like drowning.. but we only drown if we stay in the water and your faith helps you float and swim through it.. All the best for 2024 Kim. Another year of poetic soup and all the love that comes with it..
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 9:42 AM
Happy New Year, Silent! It is so good to have you here! I appreciate your comment! God bless!
Rodgers Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 5:47 AM
Kim your poignant spiritual poem vividly illustrates the struggle against life's trials. Through metaphors of rain, snow, and spiritual resilience, you eloquently portray a resilient spirit finding contentment in surrender. The imagery, emotional depth, and the theme of finding peace in spiritual faith resonate profoundly, crafting a powerful narrative within a concise yet evocative structure. Our God is our resting place. Happy New Year, Kim! Blessings, Daniel!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 9:43 AM
Sigh…love Our God is our resting place! Indeed He is! Thank you and God bless you, Daniel!
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