My One Regret

If I weren't afraid, I'd...
Have pulled that red lipstick
Out of my purse 
And with cover
Of sister and cousin
Surrounding your coffin
Replaced that drab pink coral
With your trademark red

We knew it wasn't a colour
You'd have been caught in dead




9/11/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/4/2020 9:52:00 PM
Baha, great write Mo, ya should have done it.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/5/2020 5:00:00 AM
Yes, I should have. Truly. x!
Date: 12/1/2019 10:37:00 PM
What a lovely touching Poem Thank you... Shirley
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/2/2019 7:36:00 AM
Thank You Shirley! xomo
Date: 10/10/2019 11:09:00 AM
Very interesting write Mo, I see I'm last on this train, but congrats on the contest on POTD and being in the top 100, an impressive feat!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 10/10/2019 12:52:00 PM
Thank you John! I'm blown away. My muse sat on this for over a decade till Line's first line prompt, apparently worth the wait ;), xomo!
Date: 10/8/2019 8:14:00 PM
Love it :)
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 10/9/2019 7:04:00 AM
Thank you PM :))) xomo!
Date: 10/7/2019 9:53:00 AM
Just love your poems Maureen.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 10/7/2019 12:18:00 PM
Thank you Charlie. xomo <3
Date: 10/6/2019 5:40:00 PM
Great play on words, brilliant MoMo
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 10/7/2019 7:35:00 AM
Thank you TS. This was swirling in my brain for years, just waiting for a first line I guess. xomo
Date: 10/4/2019 4:09:00 PM
Only you Maureen can do what you do with words! A FAV for me <3
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 10/6/2019 9:17:00 AM
Thank you so much P.S. xomo <3
Date: 10/1/2019 12:10:00 PM
Beautifully Penned Maureen. Congratulations on your win.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 10/2/2019 8:18:00 AM
Thank you Francesca! xomo :)
Date: 9/23/2019 10:51:00 PM
Yes! so happy you got the win with this amazing poem.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/24/2019 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Jeanne! Did not see coming I'm blown away by the response to this little poem xomo
Date: 9/23/2019 11:57:00 AM
What an image, well done, congrats.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/23/2019 12:29:00 PM
Thank you DM! xomo :),
Date: 9/22/2019 9:38:00 AM
you know I loved this first time round Mo, thanks for making me smile and many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/23/2019 12:28:00 PM
Thank you Lovely! :), xomo Hugs
Date: 9/21/2019 10:17:00 PM
This was an amusing read. Congrats!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/22/2019 7:44:00 AM
Ank you Juliet! :) xomo!
Date: 9/21/2019 8:53:00 PM
Maureen, amazing write and congratulations on your wonderful win !
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/22/2019 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Constance <3 xomo!
Date: 9/21/2019 2:45:00 AM
I am certainly not surprised to see this gem in First Place Mo! Congratulations on your deserving Top win! : ) xxoo
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/21/2019 9:13:00 AM
Thank you Connie! I'm blown away ~x
Date: 9/20/2019 8:23:00 PM
Congratulations to you - This was such a original and filled with talent so alive. God bless you
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/21/2019 9:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Regina! Hugs xomo
Date: 9/20/2019 7:17:00 PM
back to say congrats on your top win :) hugs
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/21/2019 9:10:00 AM
Thank you Sandra! xomo :)
Date: 9/20/2019 5:33:00 PM
oh you should have done it. you really should have!! (I am pretty sure I'd have done it, but with my sisters as my cover!!) This was fantastic. Congrats on the win
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/21/2019 9:09:00 AM
Yeahhh, should've. ;), Working on my balls. Thank you! Hugs
Date: 9/20/2019 2:08:00 PM
Oh wow Maureen, this deserves to be number one and it is, well done it is brilliant and a true story too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx have been away so congrats on POTD too x
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/21/2019 9:06:00 AM
Thank you Ann. I'm blown away. Hugs xomo!
Date: 9/18/2019 3:19:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Maureen! This is a bittersweet write.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/21/2019 9:03:00 AM
Thank you Kim! :), hugs! xomo
Date: 9/18/2019 3:13:00 PM
This is so good Mo! I don't know why they don't ask the bereaved more before making up the faces of the dead. The mortuary that prepared my grandfather for viewing put a ridiculous smile on his face which pained all of us to look at. My grandfather never looked like that in his life. I believe I apologized to him for what they did. Congratulations on your deserving POTD honors! : ) xxoo
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/21/2019 9:02:00 AM
Oh my!!!! That would be disturbing. Thank you Connie, hugs mo
Date: 9/18/2019 2:54:00 PM
Oh but you should have anyway! Love this so much! Congrats on your POTD
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/21/2019 8:57:00 AM
;), Thank you Jeanne! xomo
Date: 9/18/2019 9:45:00 AM
I need to stop by this POTD page more often. Congrats my friend. So well deserved. I am thrilled for you
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Date: 9/21/2019 8:56:00 AM
Thank you Chris ~x
Date: 9/17/2019 8:59:00 PM
I love the spirit of this poem, Mo. Your masterful pen has blended poignancy and humor with your trademark brilliance. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always, my lovely.. ~Susan
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/18/2019 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Lovely! (I'm seeing that word a lot more ;) HUGS! xomo <3
Date: 9/17/2019 7:37:00 AM
I loved this the first time and thought I had commented but my computer went down before I could. So now I am coming back and saying BRAVO. Love this one. POTD. GREAT JOB deciders! Applauding now.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/18/2019 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Caren! :))) xomo <3
Date: 9/17/2019 7:26:00 AM
I’m reading through POTD and I see this piece was honoured. It has now made me smile a second time.;0). Congrats!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/18/2019 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Rick! I'm sure mum is smiling on the other side ;) xomo!
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