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My Oak

My once-strong oak, you’re bending low. How sad it is to see you so. I met you when you had begun Your fresh ascent beneath the sun. How young you were- a slender tree - Before our time began to flee. Your leafy crown - how nice and full; How filled with hope - your yearning soul! Beneath much sun and too much rain, you’ve grown in girth and weathered strain. Your aging limbs are growing frail and next to younger trees you pale. But still you stand, my trusty friend; I know you‘ll be there till the end. A stump, however, you’ll become, cut down by time. We all succumb! One day I’ll say (from where I’ll be) - I loved a stump and he loved me. And then I’ll say: Come, all, and see - That stump -again- is a strong tree!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/11/2012 6:24:00 AM
i tooi love the old oak tree i think you read my one... this is so wonderful, bring the whole poem to life, is really clever...
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Date: 11/18/2010 10:20:00 AM
Such a fun and sweet poem, Andrea....your trusty friend...a tree stump!! :)
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Date: 11/17/2010 10:22:00 PM
I was right :) this is in the winner's circle ;) -- yay for you and I enjoyed reading this again and hmm so this is a metaphor for something as well--gosh I can be so dense sometimes? Now this makes it even more meaningful!! Way to go with this write :) -- hugs to you -- nikko :)
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Date: 11/17/2010 10:22:00 PM
Congrats btw :) hugs again
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Date: 11/17/2010 10:13:00 PM
Andrea...many congrats on big win in the contest... Luv/Best wishes.... hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/17/2010 7:50:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on a super win in Matt's contest for falling in luv with the tree stump.. a great entry and a great win for u my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 11/17/2010 7:49:00 PM
A beautiful and deeply touching poem. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 10/22/2010 1:14:00 AM
Excellent, this is my kind of poetry my dear, every line a winner! The tree of life. I really enjoyed that one Andrea. hicky
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Date: 10/21/2010 6:14:00 PM
And, as usual, you deliver a top flight poem and entry. We are all humbled by your talent. We are all grateful that you choose to display it here. Regards, Gerard
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Date: 10/20/2010 7:42:00 AM
I really enjoryed reading this. Such a brilliant flow of words.
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:42:00 PM
this one has a soothing rhythm ... Lovely couplets Andrea ... thoroughly enjoyed the read love and hugs Jayne
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Date: 10/18/2010 1:32:00 PM
Veery well written,Its amazing how deceivingly simplistic well written poetry is. Thanks for teaching me how to write better. Regards Priscilla
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Date: 10/17/2010 11:23:00 PM
HEY! :) I am back! I had to deal with something personal for the past few months...and I can't say how long I'll be able to be out and about on poetrysoup even now. But anyway, I'm back for the time being. Sweet poem! I'm uploading a few, come to check them out? ;)
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:48:00 PM
What a beautiful poem. I am still around and I do still come on to the site from time to time. I just don't log in. Thank you for caring so much and sending me a message. I do still write. But the ones that I have written as of late are to painful for me to post here. As for having one of my poems as anyone's favorites is an wonderful honor. Thank you as very much. By the way keep up the wonderful work. Lots of Love, Misty
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:39:00 AM
How true, Andrea. Even trees age and eventually succumb to time. This is a very creative and tender approach to the contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:06:00 AM
Ah - the trees! Fine couplets here, Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/17/2010 7:38:00 AM
artful and beautiful. one of your best. i loved it. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 10/17/2010 5:28:00 AM
Wow, Andrea,This is a fantastic write... hard not to read over and over again...love Michael
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Date: 10/17/2010 4:44:00 AM
Brilliant one Andrea.. good luck in Matt's contest .. nice how u built it up to a grand relationship in your lines...nice form too.. everyone who enters has really extended their creativity to be in luv with a tree stump..good write..my friend...
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Date: 10/17/2010 4:13:00 AM
Thanks for your soup mail. I am here again. Wish you all the best with the Oak, Andrea
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Date: 10/17/2010 4:07:00 AM
Andrea I have read it again. Thanks for the heads up. It made me smile now ;) knowing that's everything you guys have been through he is still there and he will be there till the end! ;) that's love and I love this piece even more now. You should read this to him ;) love Wilma
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Date: 10/17/2010 3:43:00 AM
A brilliant piece of creation from your colorful pen. A Gem of a Poem my friend. While adoring the upcoming and beauty of your Oak tree, you have made an EverGreen Tree on the pages of your Poetry. And thank you for your valuable comments on my Poem 'Ground Zero'. I would be the happiest one if a Garden of God can be created. I am writing a Folk Song in Hindi and its English version also. Hope to post it by tomorrow. Pl. Let me know how you like it. Love best wishes always....Ravindra...Andre
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Date: 10/16/2010 11:46:00 PM
this is good inspirational write and this is going to my favs...^_^ v
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Date: 10/16/2010 7:30:00 PM
Great work Andrea. You did a good job with a tough subject. Good luck in the contest. Love, joyce
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Date: 10/16/2010 4:29:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this creative work that should be in the winners' circle..Sara
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