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December 11, 2023    6.56pm

My New Year 2024 Resolutions

My twenty, twenty-four’s resolutions
Are: first find my problems great solutions,
That's focus more on my pen,
Eating will be forgotten,
I can control my body expansions.

Another thing that I’m planning to do,
With my bicycles, there I always go;
No car, taxi or a bus,
Just drive pedals with my ass,
Staying at near places saves my cash, too.
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Agustin Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 12:12 AM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing this. Joyous New year to you and your family. God bless you. (By the way, were you able to visit your relatives in the City of Pines?)
Gasun Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 8:02 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings. Always my pleasure to share my humble work dear. Have a Joyous and Prosperous New Year to you and your family too. God bless. By the way, I'm still planning to visit them this coming year if we're given longer vacation. Crossing my fingers. Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 1:52 PM
Congratulations with your win. I loved reading your fun Limerick write with a great ending. Yes, save some cash. Hugs... Happy New Year... Write More In 24...........................
Gasun Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 7:59 AM
Thank you so much my dear poet friend Paula for reading my poem, your uplifting comments and congratulatory greetings. I'm glad you like and enjoyed. Happy New Year and wishing you all the Best this year. I'll try my best to write more. Thank you so much for your continuous encouragement, support and friendship. God bless you abundantly.Hugs
Fowler Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 9:56 AM
Run one and true dear friend. Congratulations Len! :)
Gasun Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 7:57 AM
I will try if I can do running. Yes, I think I can still do. Thank you so much my dear poet friend Linda for reading my poem and yur congratulatory greetings. Wishing you and your family/loved ones all the best this new year. Happy New Year! Hugs
La France Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 6:40 AM
Len, congratulations on your win in my Funny New Years Resolutions contest, your poem was fun and I liked it a lot, Happy New Year, Constance
Gasun Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 7:55 AM
Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Constance. Your approval on my poem through my win means a lot to me. God bless you always. Happy New Year 2024!
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December 18, 2023 at 4:36 PM
Dear sweetest Len, I loved this very amusing limerick for your next year’s goals! So many can relate to it. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for putting a big smile on my face :):) and for all the joys you bring to so many throughout the year including me. May you have the happiest time at Christmas where you can relax. Happy holidays my lovely friend. Love and big hugs xx :):)
Gasun Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 10:40 PM
Thank you for reading and loving this limerick my dear poet friend. Thanks a lot for your lovely and uplifting words and expecially for your loving Christmas wishes and greetings. Merry Christmas my dearest poet friend. Bear Hugs
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December 12, 2023 at 11:30 AM
My dearest friend, Len! Your limerick is just choke full of delight and great goals for the new year! Love that you put this into a limerick! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you Advent blessings, dear friend!
Gasun Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 10:33 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your lovely comments and your loving wishes and blessings my dear poet friend Sam. May God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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December 11, 2023 at 11:28 AM
Love this Len….its funny and made me smile! Debx
Gasun Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 10:28 PM
Thank you for reading my dear poet friend Deb. I'm glad my poem made you smiles! God bless you always and your writings, Hugs
Gasun Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 7:01 AM
Written: December 11, 2023 6.56pm
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January 1, 2024 at 8:04 AM
Funny New Years Resolutions for 2024 Contest Judged: 12/31/2023 6:02:00 AM Sponsored by: Constance La France Place 2 ( up to 3 multi-w)
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