Get Your Premium Membership

My Need For Love

My need for love is never sated it's not dated but continuously present ever feeling always reeling from its demands it gets out of hand you can't possibly understand My need for love... My need for love is longevity's flame... I feel no shame it's always the same it sears and never fears but scorches and torches any barrier livid carrier it roars temperature tempter it soars flaring and daring not even caring that I burn that I yearn for more of its heat to be complete it blazes endless kindling stoking the fire delirium and desire together conspire to take me up higher till I combust consumption on repeat all in my trajectory consumed history... what a tragedy for me is this...insatiable entity my need for love... My need for love is never quenched temerity of thirst always at its worst It withers me can't escape...can't be free its depth demonstrated its force contemplated this love well never fills though fed till it spills offering liquid thrills it kills...for in no time, you see it feels empty to me can it be? my need for love... My need for love is insatiable I weep, I weep for no one can keep a steady supply and I wonder why I sigh I die there's not one reply to My need for love My need for love... well now that you know cause I've put it on show My love, are you able to keep it all stable supply and demand with your lips, with your hand be the fullfiller liberate from this killer satiation subscriber desire docilizer need nullifier of... My need for love Yes, my need for love from sated to abated fully consecrated will be when you make love to me Eileen Manassian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/16/2018 8:53:00 AM
Need flows in many directions.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/16/2018 8:39:00 AM
Need is a powerful thing.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2018 12:44:00 AM
Mine too... the only thing that I need more of, ... is more love...
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2018 12:44:00 AM
Mine too... the only thing that I need more of, ... is more love...
Login to Reply
Date: 5/30/2018 3:43:00 PM
This is a tsunami of love Eileen! Lucky guy...
Login to Reply
Date: 5/29/2018 9:51:00 PM
Whew! That's a lot of love Eileen. Make sure he has a good back and a good heart! Spirited write and immensely enjoyed:)
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/30/2018 4:59:00 AM
haha...loved the response. I'm glad you liked this piece. When one is truly loved, one understand the mysteries of life. :) Hugs
Date: 5/29/2018 6:16:00 PM
I was surprised at the ending - but happily. To need love so badly.....well, it would have been so sad if it didn't happen.
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/30/2018 5:01:00 AM
Thanks, Sunlite. I'm contemplating writing a follow up to this poem which depicts that very scenario. One of the worst...most demoralizing...most humiliating instances is exactly that...when physical love is withheld. Thank you for your post.
Date: 5/29/2018 5:37:00 PM
A spirited declaration supported by many clever lines and rhymes, Eileen. Enjoyed the quick tempo in this poem. Sort of had me rocking all the way through it. Awesome! Hugs, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/30/2018 5:03:00 AM
Thank you, dear. It was a little too long, but....I just had to keep going. I enjoy the topic and it moved me along too. Will be by to visit you soon. Hugs, dear.
Date: 5/29/2018 4:26:00 PM
Indeed, it has to be someone special to fully satisfy this demanding need for love, Eileen!! Hmmm fascinated and intrigued by the phrase "supply and demand":) Hugs // paul
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/30/2018 5:04:00 AM
Well, that us ideal when supply meets the demand. It isn't always the case, is it now. ;) Oh...to be free to write to one's content. I'm enjoying this...Hugs, dear. Please check your email.
Date: 5/29/2018 4:09:00 PM
Wow. <3 <3 <3
Login to Reply
Mcgreavy Avatar
Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/30/2018 8:12:00 AM
Tis! A lovely day to you sweet Poetess xomo!
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/30/2018 5:05:00 AM
I take that as a compliment. Thanks, dear. <3
Date: 5/29/2018 3:51:00 PM
Wow! Eileen, I thought I could write love and romance well but when I read this I see that I have a lot to learn. I found this to be sensual , passionate and hot, hot , hot! It was romantic as well. I agree with Jan, you are the Queen of this genre and you manage to make it look so darn easy. Excellent job:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/30/2018 5:06:00 AM
HOT HOT HOT...Sizzle and blaze. :) I enjoyed writing this piece, dear. Thank you for the lovely words of encouragement. I've been in a bit of a rut lately and I need to get back to writing. :) Hugs
Date: 5/29/2018 3:22:00 PM
Your words are full of passion and warmth, I have enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing have a great day.
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/29/2018 3:23:00 PM
Thank you, Pixie. I appreciate your visit to my page.
Date: 5/29/2018 3:21:00 PM
You are the queen of desire and passion Eileen, I struggle to write romantic poems yet you make it look so easy:-) when are we getting more rhymes of the times!!!:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/29/2018 3:23:00 PM
Oh sweetie!!! I do want to get back to that. Life has been sort of hectic of late. I will get on that. :) Sending you warm hugs...PS...I don't quite know how to say it, but....I can never get too much of a good thing! ;)

Book: Shattered Sighs