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My Native Land


And in my dream-  I am a native girl,
I stand on a high cliff soaring above;
    the wind is whirling,
    caressing me with love.
Below the mighty Ottawa roars,
above in the azure the eagle soars;
I am one with nature and have no fears,
    birds are singing;
    flutes are ringing,
    time is ticking.
      These jagged rocks my throne,
      this place I like to roam;
once to the horizon was my home,
deep in my forest the paths are cool.
    See the deep pool,
      and wildflower jewels;
I am falling and my eagle feathers twirl,
and I wake up weeping, a lost native girl.
    
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August 9, 2016

Poetry/Verse/My Native Land
Copyright Protected, ID 16- 816-313-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


Submitted to, Contest No. 330
sponsor, Brian Strand

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Barden Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 4:22 AM
Wonderfully beautiful write, BW - just adore this! Blessings and congrats on your win! :-)
Inman Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 8:01 AM
Beautiful write BW. Smooth flow, strong content and emotions, wonderful imagery as well.
Y. Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 4:42 PM
Hi BW, That was such an amazing dream. It was so vivid with lovely imagery. I wish you the very best in the contes-7:-) Alexis
Stebbings Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 9:10 AM
This is so spiritual and poignant, BW. A really lovely piece. Barry.
Kent Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 6:40 AM
I really like the way this was put together.
La France Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Ronald thanks for the compliment, appreciate ~
Sathasivam Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 1:27 AM
Excellent. Very touching write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
La France Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 8:58 AM
Ravi thanks for visiting and for the excellent, I am part Ojibwa and I feel the pain of my ancestors ~
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