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My Muse Mortal

MY MUSE, MORTAL Last phase of life knows no demand, not to expect, not to achieve. Completed duties, enjoyed life, now getting ready to leave. Needless to assess, or to analyze, whether I could proper utilize, quality time exact precise as scheduled for me bestowed by destiny. Emotional bindings at nook and corner once intense, now staying surreal somnolent senile in silence. Immortal inevitable death dancing at door step in glory, preparing last chapter to conclude my life-story. Waiting to respond last bell about to ring. Wishful thinking in mirth to be back on rebirth, sweet song of life, again to sing. 06/29/18 'My Muse, Mortal' Contest by Gregory R Barden

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Susan Gentry

Date: 8/23/2018 5:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I notice a few literary devices. You are a true poet. Beautiful.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/23/2018 9:31:00 PM

Thank you Susan for your beautiful comment. I have come to poetry soup three years back. Before that I never ventured to write poems in English, as English is not my mother tongue. Love.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 8/23/2018 3:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. The poems really rings with alliteration.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/23/2018 9:32:00 PM

Thanks Subimal for your visit n appreciation. Warm wishes.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2018 3:40:00 AM

I love your ending in this lovely piece Anisha. I believe the soul lives on and becomes reborn to complete our karma. Beautifully composed. Congratulations on your win! : )

Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/23/2018 10:04:00 AM

Thank you Connie for your regular visit n appreciation.Love

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/21/2018 10:24:00 PM

I love the flow and direction of this wonderful gem of a poem, Anisha, TRULY the circle of life, NOT life-to-death, but life-to-life - this is how I see it as well, and you have expressed it so lovingly and tenderly, with exquisite phrasing and structure! Be VERY proud of this excellent write! Sincere congratulations on your FIFTH PLACE in the 'My Muse, Mortal' Poetry Contest - blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/23/2018 10:03:00 AM

Thanks n Warm wishes

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/21/2018 5:01:00 PM

I love where you went with this Anisha ;) a thinker persons poem, wonderful, congrats on your win! xomo

Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/22/2018 2:00:00 AM

Thanks Maureen. Love

Lyric Man

Date: 6/30/2018 6:23:00 AM

Hi Anisha.. So glad I had the opportunity to read your interesting poem this morning. I'm heading home from a road gig today and won't have this chance again for a while. Happy Weekend!

Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/22/2018 2:01:00 AM

Always thankful to you for your regular visit n appreciation. Warm Wishes.