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My Mountain Home

In my home amidst the bucolic pine trees My time spent at home is so fugacious. Autumn has come to my halcyon garden. Ephemeral summer has said her good-byes. Migrating birds from Alaska, harbingers of fall, Consume the vestigial of summer's ripe fruits. Redolent pines welcome the crisp clean air Penumbra in the setting sun as they keep vigil. In my inglenook, I curl up with a poetry book Which brings me such sempiternal happiness. © Connie Marcum Wong Note: This poem is dedicated to my oldest daughter who lives amidst the pine trees above the Russian river in northern California mountain home. I wrote this for a challenge. Poetry Challenge words 1) Bucolic means In a lovely rural setting 2) Fugacious means Fleeting 3) Ephemeral means Short-lived 4) Halcyon means Happy, sunny, care-free 5) Harbinger means Messenger with news of the future 6) Inglenook means A cozy nook by the hearth 7) Penumbra means A half-shadow 8) Redolent means Fragrant 9) Vestigial means In trace amounts 10) Sempiternal means Eternal

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/9/2019 11:27:00 AM

Hi Connie, this is such a beautiful write. You have fit in your words so wonderfully. Your lines paint such strong and beautiful visions. You paint such a wonderful canvas Connie, the reader can just walk within your visions. You ever write from your beautiful heart and your words ever sing. This write has to be fave. have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/9/2019 10:54:00 PM

Thank you so much Mike. I appreciate your lovely comment and the fave so much. I hope you are well? We are enjoying our Hawaiian winter here. : ) xxoo

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/19/2017 11:44:00 PM

I love, love, love this Connie! 'Halcyon' is such a wonderful word not often used and trust you to not only use it; you incorporate other delicious words marvelously. This poem is a beautiful example of the nourishing, spiritual fulfillment one is blessed to experience upon a click of your poetry. Your time in explaining nuances, form and other important details is deeply appreciated. You inspire, teach, guide and always from your heart Connie. You are your words, and I appreciate you. xo

John Michaels

Date: 8/18/2017 11:03:00 AM

Wow, some really tricky words to incorporate, but you've done it with aplomb! Not heard of a couple of those (bucolic and fugacious especially), so you learn something new every day! Lovely write, Connie. All the best, John.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2017 8:45:00 PM

I came to the wrong poem, but anyway, CONGRATS for the other one winning . AS I recall you scored well!!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/16/2017 10:35:00 AM

Hi Connie, a wonderful poem and you have fit in the words of the challenge to great effect. Such beautiful images sing from your pen. An excellent poem from a wonderful poetess. May your pen ever write such gold Connie. Has to go into my faves. Hugs....Mike. XX

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/17/2017 1:49:00 PM

You are so kind Mike. I appreciate your lovely comment and especially the fave. Thank you very much my friend. : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2017 3:19:00 PM

by the way, are you entering this one in the mountain contest? I sure hope you score with it, Connie! I think I will go home now and just do Soup from my house. Joe is working late today!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/17/2017 1:52:00 PM

You know by now I didn't enter this one. I liked my Let My Soul Flee poem better and so happy I made the list. : )

Maria Williams

Date: 8/15/2017 3:57:00 AM

Amazing arrangement of words Connie. Really enjoyed this poem of yours...Maria xxx

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/14/2017 4:41:00 AM

Connie, this is an awesome entry. Wishing you the best of luck with the contest with this beauty :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2017 7:56:00 PM

connie, I submitted an oldie!! Wish me luck.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/13/2017 3:00:00 PM

- Awesome poem, Connie - Hope it's for a contest ... it must be a winning poem ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/12/2017 7:39:00 PM

I wish I could say I was familiar with all those words, alas... good work CONNIE!

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/12/2017 5:18:00 PM

A Sempiternal verse my dear friend...we all need a retreat like your daughters...beautifully written...god bless...^WW^

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/12/2017 4:14:00 PM

Wow! This is a Scrabble winner for sure, Connie. I love learning new words, not that I go too fancy w/them in my poems. You, however, did a fabulous job w/incorporating them in this lush poem. Ty for the personal info on your daughter. This poem has strong sentimental value. Good write. Love and joy.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/12/2017 10:05:00 AM

Hi Connie, You used the challenge words very well. The place that your daughter calls home sounds amazing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/12/2017 8:55:00 AM

Lovely, Connie! Migrating birds from Alaska, harbingers of fall - my favorite line. I've been to Alaska and thus feel a connection with your poem. GL in the contest!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/12/2017 5:42:00 AM

Excellent and well done my friend. All the best for the contest.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/11/2017 11:36:00 PM

Amazing, Connie, luck in the contest...

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/11/2017 9:35:00 PM

I know your daughter will appreciate that; well penned.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2017 9:06:00 PM

Ahhh here it is, your gorgeous latest poem!!! You did the words proud, Connie!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/12/2017 1:51:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. Hope you will do one. : )

Jan Allison

Date: 8/11/2017 5:55:00 PM

Gosh Connie you rose to the challenge so brilliantly and you created such a beautiful poem that I am sure your daughter will love-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/11/2017 9:10:00 PM

Thank you very much Jean. Have a great weekend! : )

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/11/2017 4:44:00 PM

Connie, you did very well with this using those words precisely. Nice! :)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/11/2017 9:10:00 PM

Thank you Heidi. I love the pine trees. : )

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/11/2017 4:22:00 PM

Well done Connie--all the challenge words in just a few lines. Good luck for the contest!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/11/2017 4:39:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. The challenge is for another poetry site. I appreciate your comment. : )

Lin Lane

Date: 8/11/2017 3:51:00 PM

I want to thank your challenger, and if you challenged yourself, then I thank you for writing such a transcendental poem. Thanks for also including the definitions of the challenge words. lol

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/11/2017 4:30:00 PM

It was from a challenge I gave Lin. Thanks a lot for such a great comment. : )