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My Mother's Perfume

My mother had a box of perfumes that she wore, each one had a different thing it was for The best days were the ones when she chose the yellow bottle that smelled like rose When she wore it she was always beaming, with good times and joy she was teeming If she smelt of violets then you knew, that day she was feeling quite terribly blue She'd wear something vanilla if rushed, makeup not done and hair still unbrushed When feeling particularly young, on her skin the smell of cotton candy sung She'd smell of baby powder when she was feeling older, her face a dangerous smolder She was going to get things done if she smelled like fresh pine and sun The day or the mood you could always tell just from the way my mother smelled

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Date: 10/18/2016 10:41:00 PM
ALANA, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/13/2016 8:12:00 PM
By the way this is beautiful and inspiring. I give it a 7ó.... pd
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Date: 10/13/2016 8:11:00 PM
Alana S, ó,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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