My Mother- POTD

Wrapped round in swaddling clothes,
I saw her bright smiling face.
Lying helpless, still in a trance,
I sensed her soft soothing touch.

Warm it was when huddled tight,
Glad it was to be held close,
Pleasure it was to be lifted up,
And Heaven it was to be in her lap.

She took me in her gentle hands,
Fed me with her nourishing milk,
Made me sleep with lullabies sweet,
Cared her children day and night

She ever remained a pillar of strength,
In whom I saw a never failing friend.
Led me through the devious turns of life,
Always there to lend her helping hand

Wise it was to seek her counsel –
In complex issues too hard to solve,
Sane and sound, she ever remained.
To trials of life, she never surrendered.

She taught us the quintessence of life,
She showed us the route to tread,
Her zest for life never once ceased,
Her trust in God was ever on the rise

As I look back to days of yore,
All I wish is to conjure up the past,
To be reborn a second time,
To be my mother’s darling child!

~ Poem of the Day~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Riabi Dziri Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 3:06 AM
How could I miss to honour your wonderful poetry! What you have displayed of Love, gratitude and recognition to so precious a soul in so heartfelt and genuine words is truly worthy of being acknowledged and highly appreciated! Congratulations dear Valsa on your POTD honour! Well deserved! You have just received the Beauty you have poured from your beautiful soul.. My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.
Alex Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 2:15 AM
"With angel dust to luminous memories" - The poem on children is beautifully written. Congratulations!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 1:53 AM
My belated congratulations for your POTD. Thoroughly deserved. Victor
Nicole Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 6:33 PM
"To be reborn a second time, to be my mother’s darling child" This thought is tender and emotional, all at the same time. So beautiful. Such a lovely dedication to your mother, Valsa. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 3:45 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. An excellent tribute to your mother. Enjoyed your beautiful poem! Best wishes ~ Mala
Calasibetta Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 2:07 PM
Congratulations on your POTD...a lovely tribute to your Mother! Blessings, Paulette
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 1:17 PM
what a super tribute to your mother many congrats on POTD, hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 1:08 PM
Congratulations on a lovely write…POTD!
Watt Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 12:33 PM
Valsa, I wish all mothers could hear such an eloquent homage for the love, sacrifice, wisdom, courage, and emotional investment they poured into bearing and raising a child. Your admiration, honor, and respect for your mother are evident and these words speak for so many who hold their own mother in high esteem. Thank you for this and congratulations for your POTD acknowledgement ~ John
Goldsmith Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 11:30 AM
Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. A "Beautiful" story/write. I love this. Have you thought about putting in a frame??? Have a blessed day...................
May Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 8:59 AM
Wonderful tribute to your mom, Congrats on POTD
Jones Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 8:46 AM
What a beautiful tribute to your mom. Congrats on winning potd!
Mcconnell Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 8:39 AM
a lovely piece of dedication to your mother Vasla, really enjoyable, and congrats on the POTD! Blessings, Gordon
George Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 8:15 AM
Thanks for your blessings and congratulations Gordon !
La France Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 8:33 AM
Vasla, what a beautiful and emotional poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, very deserving ~ love and serenity _Constance
George Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 8:14 AM
Feel so delighted by your hearty appreciation ! Thanks a lot Constance! Much love !
Jayasankar Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:58 AM
What a beautiful tribute to your mother dear Valsa... So happy to see your poem given the POTD honor...It is well deserved... Hearty congratulations.. Hugs... ~ Ani
George Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Thank you Ani, my young gifted friend !
Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 6:57 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Valsa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
George Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 8:11 AM
My deep gratitude, Anne ! Love and hugs !
M  Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 5:35 AM
Well done Valsa! Congratulations!!! A beautiful poem. Debx
George Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Thanks once again Deb for your hearty appreciation
Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 4:28 AM
Back with BIG congratulation, Valsa, on poem of the day. Enjoy your day in the spotlight my friend.
George Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 8:08 AM
For me a sweet surprise ! Thanks a lot for your blessings !
Alex Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 4:21 AM
Great poem on mother. Congratulations!
George Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 8:07 AM
Thanks a lot dear poet friend !
Mcintosh Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 3:16 AM
Lovely write. Congrats on POTD. God bless you, Love, Gina
George Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 2:47 AM
Regina, this is a real surprise to a new comer! Thanks much for your words of congratulations !
Cunningham Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 1:19 AM
Beautiful tribute to your Mother Valsa, congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
George Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 2:46 AM
I never expected this to become POTD... ! I feel honored. Thanks a lot Tom. I enjoy reading your poems !
Riabi Dziri Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 7:13 AM
Just one other more time in Life seeing my mum.. sipping more of her Love.. feeding my soul of her warmth and Light.. just one more time with my mentor and guide.. dear Valsa, you have touched a vulnerable vein my mum used to fill before she left my mundane.. A great poetry fully immersed in a fine artistry, genuine feelings and sensitivity! Your eloquent verses do honour so precious a soul! An immense pleasure reading your gem.. My deepest regards and blessings.
George Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 2:43 AM
Glad my poem could invoke memories of your dear mom in you . This has come right from the core of my heart in all its genuineness and sponatneity ! How I wish I could be like my mom to my children... so loving, uncomplaining and committed ! Besma, you have done honor to your mother and my mother too... ! Thanks a lot dear !
Wolf Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 7:30 PM
How wonderful, Valsa. Sigh. Keep counting your blessings, my friend. Joy and More Joy, Gershon
George Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 2:37 AM
You are ever encouraging ! Thank you dear Gershon !
M  Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 6:14 PM
So beautiful Valsa….a joy to read! Debx
George Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 2:36 AM
Thanks a lot Deb ! Feel happy that you feel it beautiful !
Leffanta Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 10:37 AM
Enjoyed, but must admit I am astonished at today's lack of appreciation for mothers and the sacrifices they make for their offspring!
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