My Mother

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Everything after my mother grew bitter. I don't settle for anything any glitter. I'm not sure if I'm the one hit by the wave. Is the earth after the mother's death a grave? Written: Nov 09, 2021

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/10/2021 8:59:00 AM

Think of her often. She is your mother after all.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/10/2021 8:29:00 AM

They certainly leave a void when they pass on Lasaad, things are never quite the same. Hope you're keeping well. Tom

Sotto Poet
Date: 11/10/2021 3:07:00 PM

Thank you so much, Tom. Your concern means a lot to me. I hope you are keeping good as well

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 11/10/2021 6:53:00 AM

A bitter-sweet poem Lasaad...Delice

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/9/2021 8:03:00 PM

I don’t know the answer to that last line, but I do know losing one’s mother is extremely sad. Take care of yourself and remember the good times spent with your mother Lasaad … Belle