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My Most Intimate Dream

Reality has surpassed my most intimate dream In intensity, in passion, in love Don't ever want to fall asleep again Want to bask in the brilliant glow To drink in the pleasures of the mind Never allowing the feeling to leave To vanish, to slip away To know this feeling will never desert me Is the ultimate joy of my heart To feel the undying intensity of your love My most intimate dream is alive My most intimate dream is you

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/24/2015 3:28:00 AM

Yes, you are a romantic! This is perfectly beautiful, Jack. I simply love this kind of writing. "Want to bask in the brilliant glow To drink in the pleasures of the mind Never allowing the feeling to leave To vanish, to slip away"...my favorite lines. Very passionate one! Love it, and of course that last line! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/24/2015 5:59:00 AM

Didn't know at the time, but that last line was meant for you, my sweet friend Laura!!!! Love, Jack xxx

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/14/2012 9:42:00 AM

Couldn't resist the title and found something to brighten my day. I think you are very talented!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/14/2012 10:08:00 AM

Just an old romantic at heart! You are oh so kind dear Elizabeth... thanks a bunch! Love and hugs, Jack xxxxxxxx

Sarah Mullan

Date: 8/13/2012 9:58:00 AM

Very Intimate ;) I really like this Poem :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/13/2012 10:17:00 AM

Thank you Sarah for your kind words... love and hugs, Jack xxxxxx

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 8/13/2012 9:30:00 AM

I like your poem...thanks for sharing... :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/13/2012 10:18:00 AM

Thanks for review, Mary! Your kind words are very much appreciated! Love and hugs, Jack xxxxxx