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The boogeyman has never bothered me. I shut my eyes at night to go to sleep.. If he should be about, he’s let me be! No monsters in my closet do I keep! I know some witches, but they have no broom. They look like anybody on the street. A few have bothered me, but they don’t loom As threats to me, and sometimes they act sweet. I keep my distance from them when I can. Another kind of monster I can see Seems not a threat to woman or to man. Those zombies mainly scare us on TV! In haunted places folks are seeing ghosts, And mediums are speaking with the dead. A demon would be scarier than most! Imagine wrestling those jerks in your head! I cannot think of any monster I Can claim as mine; I guess symbolically are some I know that make me want to cry! One brings along with him anxiety. He whispers in my ear when times are tough, But I’ve no fear he’ll make me ache or bleed. He laughs at me when I don’t have enough Of time or money that I think I need. Another monster carries with him pain. Sometimes he visits me out of the blue, And though invisible, he is so grim He makes me feel there’s nothing I can do. I cannot shake him off when pain is great. Sometimes strong aspirins can make him go, But other times, I have to wait and wait To see him leave; oh, my, he can be slow! One monster I have known most of my life. His name is Melancholy. Sometimes fear Accompanies him when he comes with strife. I feel his presence more each passing year. So zombies, witches, ghosts and boogiemen Might be out in the world, for all I know, But monsters I deplore come to me when I let hope falter. Then my monsters grow!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/2/2015 7:10:00 PM
As always excellent work! love the flow and various monsters. Still remember seeing the original Alien in a darkened theater. Have checked under bed ever since!
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Date: 9/30/2015 7:27:00 AM
Great take on the theme, Andrea. Love the poem.
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Date: 9/29/2015 8:26:00 PM
Hello Andrea... flows along beautifully and yes, the gremlins in the mind can overtake rational thinking - Lindsay
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Date: 9/28/2015 3:42:00 PM
Some interesting monsters..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 9/28/2015 3:25:00 PM
riveting take on the prompt, andie...great grasp of melancholia's plight...really greeat stuff!.. hugggs
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:21:00 AM
Andrea, well done my friend, oh yes that "monster melancholy" is a nasty one *7*and thanks for visiting my poem, maple tree ~~
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Date: 9/28/2015 4:22:00 AM
Whenever I comment, I always forget to rate the poem but I DID it this time...A 7 for the poem and a 7 for you (Why can't it go up to 10?) There is a wonderful life lesson here that I for one, very much identify with. NOW, please tell Dr. Tim about the monster you refer to in verses seven and eight. He will make it all better...Seriously, I trust this is just normal aches and pains? Soup Mail will be delivered shortly - Tim
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Date: 9/27/2015 11:18:00 PM
I believe there are monsters in the world. Those preying on the weak, the children, the less fortunate. Those we can do something about.
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Date: 9/28/2015 12:48:00 AM
tim, if the challenge were just to write about monsters alone, that of course would be the obvious choice. Fortunately for me, those you mention are not my personal monsters!
Date: 9/27/2015 10:29:00 PM
Wow Andrea, this is a little masterpiece. Almost as if it was channeled, it flows so well. A really great write! 7
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Date: 9/27/2015 7:44:00 PM
This is an excellent monster poem my friend. The dark shows , monsters hiding in our heads, are scariest of all. Simply because they have 24/7 access to our body and soul. Awesome poem, very sold 7 ..
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Date: 9/27/2015 6:30:00 PM
This sure describes how you see "monsters". I do recognize melancholia, as I guess most poets do. The muse never stirred for this contest until I saw the word. May or may not join. All the best in this contest, Andie! hugs!
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Date: 9/27/2015 12:30:00 PM
Happy Halloween! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/27/2015 11:43:00 AM
Be careful when you fight with these monsters,lest you thereby become a monster.Sorry can't help but quote Nietzsche.This is an excellent write and many can relate to it as there are familiar monsters lurking in the vulnerable mind of us poets.
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Date: 9/27/2015 11:35:00 AM
A brilliant write and a very delightful poem to read this is my very dear friend, Andrea! I'm so glad to read it tonight and so enjoyed. I'm sure it will do well in the contest. Yes, there are really many monsters in life :)). I also wrote a simple poem for this contest thinking of another kind of monster I've heard from others and from movies:) but I was late in the contest. Thank you for sharing and good luck! Many hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 9/27/2015 11:03:00 AM
Yes, the many kinds of monsters. I have most kinds, just try to take one day at a time. Have a nice week end. Love, daver
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Date: 9/27/2015 8:36:00 AM
Never thought of pain, worry and such as monsters but you are right, they are the worse. Ones that each of us have to battle on our own. Well written Quatrain.
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Date: 9/27/2015 1:50:00 AM
Andrea, All the best for the contest for your considered write... A 7.
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Date: 9/26/2015 11:08:00 PM
Andrea if there are monsters these for sure are the ones we have to look out for. Excellent write.
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Date: 9/26/2015 10:49:00 PM
Dear Andrea These are truly the real monsters within us all, mine are the shadows of my tormented childhood, it's not easy living with these visions of abusiveness, the only way I can deal with these inward boogeymen is to expose them to the light of others, hoping this may help someone else, I know where you are coming from in this personal work of yours, thank you for the connected sharing, and remember my friend your not alone in this world of monsters, cheri
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Date: 9/26/2015 10:34:00 PM
This is fantastic, dear Andrea!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D
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