Ravindra K Kapoor Poet I do not know?

My Mind Wants To Flow

My mind wants to flow

My mind wants to flow and flourish
With soil underneath
And Sun shining above 
In the sky

My mind wants to flow and flourish
And blow like a wind
Free like the children of Nature
And soothing like the cool breeze
Blowing in hot summer

My mind wants to flow and flourish
And splash like a sea wave
Touching its shores and expressing,
Its evergreen love and
The desire to embrace the rocks
To get the much sought after Peace within 

Blessed is the place and minds
Where the love for freedom blows
And blessed is the heart, which bleeds
Where mind and souls are tied-up
In bondages and are not free

Ravindra

Kanpur India   5th Feb. 2005

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Poet Destroyer A June 11, 2010 at 7:29 PM set your mind free lol, enjoyed..P.D.

Michael J. Falotico May 3, 2010 at 2:46 PM Very well written ! and Im glad you like the rain too!!!

Susan Palli February 17, 2010 at 2:31 AM profound, thanks

Simone Segal February 13, 2010 at 2:30 PM Oh what a beauty! when minds do tie up with their souls, there would be no bondage, love Simone

Sara Kendrick February 9, 2010 at 5:10 AM The last three lines could include so many people for so many reasons. I feel that this is a spirit sent message. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 5, 2010 at 3:36 PM Especially beautiful Ravindra .. great analogies within the poem of a free flowing flourishing mind... producing a lovely write as this "beauty".. enjoyed the fragrance of your poetry tonight...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Caroline Cécile Delacroix February 5, 2010 at 2:47 PM Interesting poem, Ravindra. I like the content you express through the lines, although it was a bit difficult for me to understand the last stanza. A couple of remarks I wish to say. Perhaps you meant "float" instead of flow and in the 2nd stanza, blowing seems too strong a word for breeze, perhaps "refreshing a hot summer" might work for the context. A beautiful vision of a poem. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Best wishes, caroline.