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My Mind

My mind is closed Creativity is lacking I can’t think straight My ideas are smacking Nothing is right It all falls apart I dislike my mind For when it imparts I can’t seem to write Nothing seems to fit I feel the words there But they seem to sit It’s the evening hours My heart beckons But my mind does not It floats in the heavens
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/14/2012 7:22:00 PM
I'd say your mind is very open, Russell, not closed!!
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Date: 8/13/2012 4:52:00 PM
very bloody good ol mate...flows so good and rhymes, id rate, a 7 no worries ... won't hesitate... can we copy our poetry from the server in one bag hehehe to our hard disk???
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Date: 8/13/2012 2:05:00 PM
vivid description of the way we all feel at times, I guess, my friend
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