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My Masterpiece -

is still out there somewhere thousands of light years away My Masterpiece is immortal It has always been there It will forever BE there in God's eternal satellite traveling the universe circling the galaxies constantly sending signals signals meant only for me My Masterpiece is very patient (After all, time is no problem) My masterpiece will never stop Never stop sending and searching searching and sending until I learn: how to extend my antennae

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Skat A

Date: 8/16/2015 1:03:00 AM

Tim, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page :). **SKAT**

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/16/2015 7:33:00 AM

This is a good start, congratulations.

Skat A

Date: 6/16/2015 12:26:00 AM

congratulations

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/11/2013 7:06:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & love Cher how's the publishing going?

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/11/2013 4:22:00 PM

I sure know the feeling of the searching for that masterpiece. A fine poem that describes the theme perfectly. Congrats on your win :)

Skat A

Date: 8/11/2013 2:40:00 PM

Tim, love it........... congratulations!!! Love ~SKAT~

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/11/2013 11:04:00 AM

Not to worry..........you will connect when the time is right.........(and I wouldn't be surprised if you have written it........and can't see it for the star's that shine in your eyes!)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/11/2013 10:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning place Tim xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/11/2013 6:26:00 AM

Good morning Tim, CONGRATULATIONS.... , Thank you for the lovely entry.:-) When you have time enjoy the winners and my sweet blog * Called "The Liberty Bell" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15780&PoetID=18720 Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... PS... stop by my newest poem if you like. "Summer Rain" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=498166 XOX-love Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2012 2:16:00 PM

wow, tim, this is one of your best for sure!! big congrats on this inventive poem's win.

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 11/1/2012 6:55:00 AM

Congrats on your win!

Kash Poet

Date: 10/30/2012 1:34:00 PM

A mind blowing poem here Tim!Congrats on the win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2012 11:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Good Enough" contest. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Tanya Harrington

Date: 10/30/2012 11:17:00 AM

Congrats on your win. I enjoyed this very much. Hope we all learn how to extend our antennae! :) Tanya

Len Gasun

Date: 10/30/2012 7:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your 3rd place win my friend! hugs:)LG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/30/2012 6:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Good Enough" contest Tim. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/30/2012 12:00:00 AM

CONGRATS TIM ON A GRAND WIN FOR THIS MASTERPIECE POETRY LUV ..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/29/2012 8:53:00 PM

This is delightful Tim. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/29/2012 8:20:00 PM

Tim.. Congratulations with your wonderful and "Good Enough" poem in Sandy's contest. xox~PD

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 10/29/2012 7:19:00 PM

Nice win Tim' love Sandy

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/9/2012 7:07:00 PM

hey tim! this is a very cool poem - i love the whole idea of it and the way you've expressed it. ~ my poem "connection" was about an online scrabble game called "words with friends." i play it with my son and that's sometimes the only way i get to connect with him in his busy life.

Len Gasun

Date: 10/9/2012 1:09:00 AM

Very fascinating write you've penned my dear friend. i love it!! Good luck and best wishes always!! love and hugs:) Leonora

Len Gasun
Date: 10/9/2012 1:28:00 AM

thanks for the congratulatory comments in my winning! have a nice day always!!

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/8/2012 6:05:00 AM

Tim, now you got me with this one.. love you wit and the message :) have an awesome week, love Wilma

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/8/2012 5:06:00 AM

your masterpiece is just that, Tim,, love the juxtaposing last line, brilliant and very clever...

Jack Horne

Date: 10/7/2012 1:10:00 PM

lol, witty write indded, my friend. congrats on all your wins : )