My Magical Dream

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They entered my dream quickly Yellow eyed cat and bunny blue Unicorn and brightly colored castle Winged dragon making a weird little mew I myself appeared as a beautiful princess now Kind of hoping this mystical dream will come true

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Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 2/23/2022 1:29:00 AM

I was reading every word and going back to the picture you painted! Come back, read the next word before jumping to the picture. Looks like your students can clearly visualise what you wanna tell them.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/23/2022 4:26:00 AM

I have no problem letting them visualize whatever they want.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 2/22/2022 7:34:00 PM

I have a feeling it has come true for you often during your life, Caren. You paint what is in your mind and heart. You see them because you have experienced them! Just got home. Too late to read anymore.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/23/2022 4:27:00 AM

Welcome BACK my friend! I am delighted to see you!