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My Love's Core

With your frostbite inches away Are you within your skin or mine — ? For our cold is a missing day With your frostbite inches away — You're in my arms, the next move staid Approaching Winter's passing time — With your frostbite inches away Are you within your skin or mine — ?

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/31/2025 9:58:00 AM

A well-constructed triolet. Strange I don't think I ever tried one. I prefer free verse. However I enjoyed your poem vey much.

Len Gasun

Date: 1/25/2025 9:34:00 PM

Awesome triolet my dear poet friend. I enjoyed reading it. GL in the contest my dear poet friend. Hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/25/2025 3:34:00 PM

i like the subtle tinge of sensuality within this write, paige... your pen flowed remarkably!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/25/2025 12:13:00 PM

Interesting question asked in this musical triolet!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/24/2025 12:01:00 PM

Hi Paige, such a romantic view of winter, very intriguing~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2025 10:49:00 AM

Is this for the contrast triolet contest. You chose a great contrast, Paige

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/24/2025 2:22:00 AM

very subtle poem, i like the final interrogation, may be both, enjoyed your delicate poem

Ink Empress

Date: 1/23/2025 11:29:00 PM

Your lines flow so well that it is doesnt even feel like refrains, so seamless! Best ever so well written and delivered! Absolutely love the way youv woven your triolet! Sending you light always dear paige!

Mat Ignacio

Date: 1/23/2025 7:06:00 PM

i appreciate the care and thoughtfulness that went into this composition, there is such a naturalness in your delivery. great line: "Are you within your skin or mine — ?" An indelible question indeed.

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 1/23/2025 6:39:00 PM

Nice triolet. I like the question.

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/23/2025 5:57:00 PM

Wonderful triolet, Paige. Loved reading it today.