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My Lovers Beyond Compare

I greet you, oh mighty Sun!
You who warm us everyone
You who glow to make things grow
You who melt all ice and snow
You are a most mighty one
For you rule the sky, oh Sun
But my Lover have you seen?
Oh Sun, now where have you been?
Far stronger he is than you
His rays warm me through and through
He knows how to “solar” please
His heat he turns on with ease
At times he warms nice and slow
Until I melt, and I flow
Then sizzles without a care
He drizzles from solar flare
He scorches me with his might
Defies the coming of night
Oh, Sun Prince, can you not see?
My Lover’s Sun King to me?

Oh, Moon, you send out your beams
Enchantress are you of dreams
I have named you, Mistress Moon
For you make each lover swoon
But even YOU can’t compare
With my Love! Try, if you dare!
Like you, he lights up my night
Yet brighter far than YOUR bright
Into nights his magic spills
Brings to body lunar thrills
He makes my wild passion rise
To his pull, my heart complies
Oh, Mistress Moon, do beware
My Lover is much more fair

Oh Stars, be snuffed out in shame
Your twinkle is not the same
As my Lover’s eyes at night
Incandescent is his light!
They gleam down on me in love
When like you, he rides above
They engage as he commands,
my body with “eye” demands
There is not a finer gaze
than his eyes that leave a daze
Oh, Starlight, you weakened are
For his eyes outshine your Star

Oh mighty Wind, well you sigh
For your strength, I do deny
While your gusts can lash and whip
and prowess, a soul can grip,
My Lover’s strength is much more
Than all that you have in store
He brings me down to my knees
By his breath, a lovely breeze
My body you can’t caress
His fury makes me undress
When he moves, I feel the rush
He presses me close, a crush
My tresses and every part,
he commands with galeful art
Oh Wind, you now must subside
For from his touch, who can hide? 

Oh mighty Waves, you that pound
that crash with a roaring sound
You crest in a foaming spray
and leave all in disarray 
My Lover, breaks over me
In waves of sheer ecstasy
He builds up a mighty roar
Then in tingling crests, I soar
He thrashes with might and pounds 
Till in his white foam I’m gowned
When the crest recedes, what bliss,
I’m lulled to sleep by his kiss!
Oh, mighty Waves, this is true
My Love is stronger than you

Oh Powers that Be, beware!
My Lover’s beyond compare!

 :) Eileen Manassian :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/16/2014 8:20:00 PM
"He makes my wild passion rise, to his pull my heart complies..." amazing exchange of attributes in this verse Eileen. You are Legend to me because you consitently reinvent the beauty and bravery of passion Beloved Poetess...J.A.B.
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Date: 12/15/2014 9:06:00 PM
You must must be the land and fire that he lives. for, a landscape of luscious wonder and heat of healing passion...Bravo on another Masterpiece and FAV. this work and love is what makes you a Legend...Justin
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/16/2014 3:07:00 AM
If only....If only.... Thank you for this, your sweetest post. It moves me, Justin. To be a legend would be sweet indeed. If I am in your eyes, then that is sweet reward for me. I think I've used sweet a time too many! ;) What can I say...You brought sweetness to my day! Hugs
Date: 12/15/2014 9:01:00 PM
Continued..."At times he warms me nice and slow, until I melt, and I flow, then sizzles without a care, he drizzles from sloar flare, he scortches me with his might, defies the coming of night..." awesome erotica and smooth rhyming. I could just go on quoting the entire composition, its just delcious from top to bottom Eileen. The way you coincide the strengths and enchantments of these natural wonders to your lover's power and effect on your mind and body is truly brlliant woman...J.A.B.
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Date: 12/16/2014 3:05:00 AM
Yes, I did like that bit myself....There is beauty in the slow burn as there is in the rapid scorching of passion. Each has its time depending on so many things. I sometimes wonder if what I write is sensual or erotic. I guess the interpretation also is key to that, don't you think? You definitely are a sensual man and may interpret my work anyway you like. "Delicious from the top to bottom." I don't know how you do it, but even your posts are just flaming....Lovely. This woman thanks you, Justin.
Date: 12/15/2014 8:49:00 PM
Oh wow, how passionately blasphemous you are Eileen...stunning celebration of your lover's predominance over the primordial giants of life itself! To experience a love that supersedes the majesty of all these enormous and vital wonders has made you the most lovely and steadfast devotee! The one you love has spurred your genius to a new grade of passion...wow!!! J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/16/2014 3:03:00 AM
Hello, my Eagle. I'm so glad to finally get a visit from you after such a long period of silence. It brings my heart joy. I'm a very intense person...I live in the superlatives, and if not live...then I dream in the superlative. It is the only way I know how to live and be. Thank you for your sweet post, Justin. I've missed you words and thoughts.
Date: 12/10/2014 10:43:00 PM
Oh wow my dear....so much love...sorry getting to you so late trying to catch up..not enough hours in the day...hugs Tim
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Date: 12/9/2014 11:53:00 AM
Long list of loved lovers lovely labours and love of life in and beyond the river .Congrat.O.B.
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Date: 12/8/2014 8:27:00 AM
Hello Eileen, some great comments here.
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Date: 12/7/2014 9:46:00 PM
Eileen, what a passionate sharing of two souls, and you've done so well in putting this feeling of the heart into words of love and devotion bravo, and thanks for your comment on my poem farewell my friend, he was a good man and to mean deserved such a wonderful tribute, cheri
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Date: 12/7/2014 3:47:00 PM
Ow my Eileen... What a powerful love poem..What an amaZing poem.I am favouriting this gem.. You WoWed me ! : )
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Date: 12/7/2014 11:04:00 AM
This is Epic and so Beautifuly written! A Fav!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 2:47:00 PM
A Fav? For me? How sweet, Maurice. I'm so glad! Hugs
Date: 12/7/2014 10:53:00 AM
- Life beautiful items in one beautiful and romantic poem, Eileen dear - Enjoy reading this poem, thank you !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 2:47:00 PM
Hugs to you, my Sunshine! Glad you dropped by! :)
Date: 12/7/2014 10:49:00 AM
Even the firmament knows it evel,It dares not...kudos to you voice of love...huggs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 2:48:00 PM
:) That is a sweet compliment. Thank you.
Date: 12/7/2014 8:59:00 AM
You both must be exhausted, this is an epic of tsunamic proportions! I enjoyed this passionate adventure.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 9:07:00 AM
;) Thank you, Rick.....A tsunami of passion would be amazing! :) Hugs
Date: 12/7/2014 8:30:00 AM
Dear dear....you've taken the powers of the universe and tamed them....again....expertly written my dear...MD
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 8:43:00 AM
MD...I miss you. Hope all is well. I wonder where you've been and what's been keeping you. Thanks for the visit. Hugs
Date: 12/7/2014 8:30:00 AM
simply incredible Eileen - am lost for words my friend!!! hugs jan xxx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 8:44:00 AM
Thanks, my sweet. I love it when that happens. :)
Date: 12/7/2014 8:08:00 AM
Ah, you do know the power of Love and that is what I calling reveling in love. Outstanding job -- I loved the way you interplayed the nature with nurture . . . you are a wise and gifted writer -- deep will I drink from your words!! Love and hugs little one! A fav and 7+
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 8:46:00 AM
I love to revel in romance, love, and passion. To bathe myself in these thoughts and to dream! :) Thank you so much for your kind comments. Nothing makes me happier than when I write something that I am content with. Drink deep. Hugs from the Little One! :)
Date: 12/7/2014 6:50:00 AM
Hello Elleen. Very imaginative. I was IMPRESSED beyond...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 8:47:00 AM
Thank you, Valerie. So glad to hear from you. :) Welcome to my page.
Date: 12/7/2014 6:32:00 AM
Awesome love poem Eileen! So beautiful and filled of happinees and warmth. A 7 for you! Have a very lovely day! :) Xxxx D.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 8:47:00 AM
Thank you, Dorian. I try to grab happiness when it comes to visit and give it a tight squeeze. It is an all too illusive guest. Hugs
Date: 12/7/2014 5:07:00 AM
Indeed love is strongest of all be it mighty waves or winds !! So true so true my dear lovely Eileen!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 8:48:00 AM
My sweet Dr Upma...Always...always good to see your smiling face. Bless you, my dear!

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