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My Love, Marianna

We sat on a wooden bench
Beneath a rustling willow tree.
Your face glowed with love
Like a desirable lily flower
The purest hope of spring.

The evening ascended in a flaming stance
My yearning heart emulated a nightingale lullaby.
I whispered your name, sweet Marianna.
It was such a lovely name
And lovelier was your face.
Such delicate features,
Such graceful lips, so red.
I dared to kiss her long and sweet.
Tell me, who could blame me?

In the hushed silence of sunset, 
I listened for the soft splash of spring.
Our tender faces breathed united in love.
I waited as the magenta moonlight shone on your face,
so that we could love as one, face to face, 
in search of the glorious blue birds of love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Legros Kelley Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 4:24 PM
Incredibly lovely poem Victor, very romantic and sweet.
Singh Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 7:26 AM
Sweet moments in life with a loved one - beautifully done.
Kitchin Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 5:59 AM
Victor, so beautiful and romantic. Wonderfully penned.
One Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 11:20 AM
So romantic and so beautiful how you describe your love and romance... you have a wonderful way of portraying love...
Sands Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 11:05 AM
Beautiful poem. You write romance poetry very well :)
Goldsmith Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 10:23 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "My Love, Marianna" write. What a great love picture here. Love Both... Have a Beautiful/Blessed ~ Easter/Spring writing away.............
Chircop Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 6:58 AM
Beautiful!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 6:27 AM
Pretty is as the name of your muse
Buhagiar Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 7:28 AM
How glad I am to hear from you again.
Anaya Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 1:01 PM
"Our tender faces breathed united in love. I waited as the magenta moonlight shone on your face," such romantic thoughts of engagement. Nothing like love~
Buehler Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 12:35 PM
This poem breathes contentment and romance, as well as the serenity of tranquil surroundings. I love the imagery, lines, such as, the second line of the second verse, and the final line of the poem. I also enjoyed the picture. Great work, Victor! :)
Empress Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 9:37 AM
“ silence of sunset” i love that and also the cadence and rhythmic flow of your word weaving here, so touching and moving and i feel the love and longing and admiration youv expressed here in such eloquence! Such love makes me dream away! A fave this is for me! Pleasure reading! Sending you light always
Proxenos Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 7:31 AM
One loves once in their lives. a lot think they are in love and then their is lust. This poem is the real MaCoy in other words true love is authentic and genuine only once in ones life! YOUR LOVE STORIES ARE ALWAYS SO BEAUTIFUL. Brilliant poetry dear friend. Hugs Jennifer.
Daniels Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 7:14 AM
Beautiful delicate love poem, Victor ! Soothing and soft before your Holy Week. I liked this line : “ I waited as the magenta moonlight shone on your face,”. May you be bathed in romantic and spiritual love. Blessings to Malta in springtime, Dear Poet.
Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 4:44 AM
Ahhh!!! Romantic and passionate one, Victor. I enjoyed reading it since I quite enjoy romance. Everyone needs a little romance in their life. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Way to go. I like the attached artwork as well since a pleasant scene. Sara K
Jones Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 3:49 AM
Whew this is very romantic! Lovely to read! Thank you for sharing Victor! Isn’t love great and inspiring?
Messina Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 2:22 AM
Very nice, Victor. Romantic with stunning imagery, my friend. Keep well. Charlie
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April 1, 2026 at 2:18 AM
A lovely memory in poetry Victor, gorgeously romantic… Beryl
Cunningham Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 11:47 PM
A beautiful romantic verse Victor, set in a perfect setting. Tom
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