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My Love Knows No Form My Love

one with the music  a vestibule for magic  love fills the night air
Let my aura deep red spill onto the page,  I an instrument in the name of poetic rage,                                                L                     O                   V                    EVOL...VES Into a voice deep and vibrating, with words feathered and lulling. We are love... Love!, nothing and everything. With you in the serenity of nothing that my love is everything.  scampers a bright moon  gifts liquid life a lit view  watch them rendezvous i wrote you a star covered night built you a sun with a dimmer light i turned it down warm and low called it a moon, made it glow i rhymed you an early morning hush so quiet you could hear a person blush i sketched a fully carpeted globe dressed it in a thick soft robe i painted it in greens, blues and a palette full your own flower garden with no weeds to pull i sung some words, some harmonized notes strummed you a new world, one that floats ...a pyramid each and every word, romance... I  do know my true love  it will make you  light headed but free. Space is that way, you know but you'll adjust. A small price  to pay these days for liberty. A chance to live in a world of ours, just us together and lives of all kinds. Maurice Yvonne
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 9/25/2014 8:30:00 PM
oh my what a win...Linda
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Date: 9/25/2014 6:20:00 PM
Man, this is so cool! You really put your inspiration to task. And an HM?! Well, at least we get to read this beauty. I like it!! The stanza: 'I wrote you a star...made it glow' is just marvelous!! Many congrats.
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Date: 9/25/2014 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations and God bless you. love and prayers always, Gina
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/25/2014 5:56:00 PM
thank you Gina.
Date: 9/25/2014 7:58:00 AM
Very fine write Maurice! Enjoyed the style n content both! Wud rank much higher! Congrats on win!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/25/2014 10:22:00 AM
thank you Dr. Sharma.
Date: 9/24/2014 4:57:00 PM
This was too nice for only an HM. I loved it!!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/25/2014 10:23:00 AM
thanks Andrea.
Date: 9/24/2014 3:29:00 PM
Maybe if you would have this is fantasy it would have placed higher :) .......congrats on the HM
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/25/2014 10:24:00 AM
I think you're right nobody likes a braggart.
Date: 9/24/2014 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM with this beautifully written poem Maurice.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/25/2014 10:25:00 AM
thank you Brenda you are so sweet.
Date: 9/24/2014 8:38:00 AM
many congratulations on your win for this wonderful feast of poetry you laid on for us:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/25/2014 10:26:00 AM
I laid who? Thank You Jan.
Date: 9/20/2014 4:09:00 AM
I'm So impressed by this write, Maurice. You have done yourself proud. I wrote you a star covered night....my favorite stanza...and the one that follows. I've been on holiday for ten days...not able to get on as often. Glad to read you again. Hugs
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/25/2014 10:28:00 AM
my favorite too , thank you Eileen.
Date: 9/19/2014 8:59:00 PM
MY gosh, you just keep it up day after day. I just love how your stanzas in here reflected the mood of where you were going and how you switched forms. Love how the part where you gifted her rhyme WAS in rhyme and then you went over to the etheree form which you have so nicely caught on to.You are going to be rocking that form, Maurice!!! Keep it up!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/25/2014 10:27:00 AM
thank you Andrea for all your kind words. It's a poem.
Date: 9/19/2014 2:25:00 AM
Nicely crafted piece of a poem on romance and love, writing a star covered night,
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/25/2014 10:29:00 AM
thank you Dr. Mehta. Your words always have an impact on me.
Date: 9/18/2014 4:55:00 PM
I am no critic, but this is inspiring. Thanks for sharing a beautiful mind.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/18/2014 5:28:00 PM
Thank you, Nicholas.
Date: 9/18/2014 4:25:00 PM
It definitely deserves a favourite.You leave me without words- Wow
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/18/2014 5:29:00 PM
i love your writing so thank you.
Date: 9/18/2014 10:26:00 AM
WOW, this is just a bit of everything. You are awesome, and I think you know it, and have every right in showing off, that you have no form, and for a second there, I thought I was the only formless poet... LOL...Always & Forever TAG UR it..... LINDA
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/18/2014 12:32:00 PM
Hey, Linda. Thanks for tagging me. I felt so priceless...oh wait a minute maybe that was a good thing.
Date: 9/18/2014 9:29:00 AM
Another "tongue in cheek" title, eh Maurice. Nicely played and written.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/18/2014 2:36:00 PM
It seems to be stucked there. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 9/18/2014 9:28:00 AM
wow so many different forms Mauirce - amazing! I struggle to get one decent poem - u r just awesome! hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 5:56:00 PM
oh yes Maurice we had a farty party lol :-) hugs jan xx
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Casarah Nance
Date: 9/18/2014 5:52:00 PM
check out one of Jan's blogs we had all participated in a fart fest a few months ago, wish you were here for that!
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 1:55:00 PM
you could do a fart footle or a fart acrostic to give it a bit of oomph lol Hugs Jan xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/18/2014 1:20:00 PM
See and I just don't feel that way about my writes. I do appreciate your unshakable support. I was going to submit a one word poem using the word "fart". I wanted to see how Cas, Tim and you would deal with that one.
Date: 9/18/2014 8:54:00 AM
wow you got a lot going on in this poetry. so many forms blended together to make your artwork. you are a painter with words an forms. well done
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/18/2014 2:29:00 PM
you are so sweet Cas, thank you.
Date: 9/18/2014 8:53:00 AM
Outstanding my friend and then to finish it off with a Nonette .....brilliant my friend
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/18/2014 2:29:00 PM
thanks Tim.
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