Maurice Yvonne Poet Free verse

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My Love Knows No Form My Love

one with the music 
a vestibule for magic 
love fills the night air


Let my aura deep red spill onto the page, 
I an instrument in the name of poetic rage,
                                                     
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       V                      
 EVOL...VES

Into a voice deep and vibrating,
with words feathered and lulling.

We are love...

Love!,
nothing and everything.
With you in the serenity of nothing
that my love is everything.

 scampers a bright moon
 gifts liquid life a lit view 
watch them rendezvous

i wrote you a star covered night
built you a sun with a dimmer light
i turned it down warm and low
called it a moon, made it glow

i rhymed you an early morning hush
so quiet you could hear a person blush
i sketched a fully carpeted globe
dressed it in a thick soft robe

i painted it in greens, blues and a palette full
your own flower garden with no weeds to pull
i sung some words, some harmonized notes
strummed you a new world, one that floats

...a pyramid each and every word, romance...

I 
do know
my true love 
it will make you 
light headed but free.
Space is that way, you know
but you'll adjust. A small price
 to pay these days for liberty.
A chance to live in a world of ours,
just us together and lives of all kinds.


Maurice Yvonne

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Poet Destroyer A September 25, 2014 at 8:30 PM oh my what a win...Linda

Abdul Malik Mandani September 25, 2014 at 6:20 PM Man, this is so cool! You really put your inspiration to task. And an HM?! Well, at least we get to read this beauty. I like it!! The stanza: 'I wrote you a star...made it glow' is just marvelous!! Many congrats.

Regina Mcintosh September 25, 2014 at 12:31 PM Congratulations and God bless you. love and prayers always, Gina Maurice Yvonne September 25, 2014 at 5:56 PM thank you Gina.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 25, 2014 at 7:58 AM Very fine write Maurice! Enjoyed the style n content both! Wud rank much higher! Congrats on win! Maurice Yvonne September 25, 2014 at 10:22 AM thank you Dr. Sharma.

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2014 at 4:57 PM This was too nice for only an HM. I loved it!!! Maurice Yvonne September 25, 2014 at 10:23 AM thanks Andrea.

Tim Smith September 24, 2014 at 3:29 PM Maybe if you would have this is fantasy it would have placed higher :) .......congrats on the HM Maurice Yvonne September 25, 2014 at 10:24 AM I think you're right nobody likes a braggart.

Brenda Meier-Hans September 24, 2014 at 11:10 AM Congratulations on your HM with this beautifully written poem Maurice. Maurice Yvonne September 25, 2014 at 10:25 AM thank you Brenda you are so sweet.

Jan Allison September 24, 2014 at 8:38 AM many congratulations on your win for this wonderful feast of poetry you laid on for us:-) Hugs Jan xx Maurice Yvonne September 25, 2014 at 10:26 AM I laid who? Thank You Jan.

Eileen Manassian September 20, 2014 at 4:09 AM I'm So impressed by this write, Maurice. You have done yourself proud. I wrote you a star covered night....my favorite stanza...and the one that follows. I've been on holiday for ten days...not able to get on as often. Glad to read you again. Hugs Maurice Yvonne September 25, 2014 at 10:28 AM my favorite too , thank you Eileen.

Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2014 at 8:59 PM MY gosh, you just keep it up day after day. I just love how your stanzas in here reflected the mood of where you were going and how you switched forms. Love how the part where you gifted her rhyme WAS in rhyme and then you went over to the etheree form which you have so nicely caught on to.You are going to be rocking that form, Maurice!!! Keep it up! Maurice Yvonne September 25, 2014 at 10:27 AM thank you Andrea for all your kind words. It's a poem.

Dr.Ram Mehta September 19, 2014 at 2:25 AM Nicely crafted piece of a poem on romance and love, writing a star covered night, Maurice Yvonne September 25, 2014 at 10:29 AM thank you Dr. Mehta. Your words always have an impact on me.

Nicholas Miller September 18, 2014 at 4:55 PM I am no critic, but this is inspiring. Thanks for sharing a beautiful mind. Maurice Yvonne September 18, 2014 at 5:28 PM Thank you, Nicholas.

Charmaine Chircop September 18, 2014 at 4:25 PM It definitely deserves a favourite.You leave me without words- Wow Maurice Yvonne September 18, 2014 at 5:29 PM i love your writing so thank you.

Poet Destroyer A September 18, 2014 at 10:26 AM WOW, this is just a bit of everything. You are awesome, and I think you know it, and have every right in showing off, that you have no form, and for a second there, I thought I was the only formless poet... LOL...Always & Forever TAG UR it..... LINDA Maurice Yvonne September 18, 2014 at 12:32 PM Hey, Linda. Thanks for tagging me. I felt so priceless...oh wait a minute maybe that was a good thing.

John Lawless September 18, 2014 at 9:29 AM Another "tongue in cheek" title, eh Maurice. Nicely played and written. Maurice Yvonne September 18, 2014 at 2:36 PM It seems to be stucked there. Thanks for the visit.

Jan Allison September 18, 2014 at 9:28 AM wow so many different forms Mauirce - amazing! I struggle to get one decent poem - u r just awesome! hugs jan xx Jan Allison September 18, 2014 at 5:56 PM oh yes Maurice we had a farty party lol :-) hugs jan xx Casarah Nance September 18, 2014 at 5:52 PM check out one of Jan's blogs we had all participated in a fart fest a few months ago, wish you were here for that! Jan Allison September 18, 2014 at 1:55 PM you could do a fart footle or a fart acrostic to give it a bit of oomph lol Hugs Jan xx Maurice Yvonne September 18, 2014 at 1:20 PM See and I just don't feel that way about my writes. I do appreciate your unshakable support. I was going to submit a one word poem using the word "fart". I wanted to see how Cas, Tim and you would deal with that one.

Casarah Nance September 18, 2014 at 8:54 AM wow you got a lot going on in this poetry. so many forms blended together to make your artwork. you are a painter with words an forms. well done Maurice Yvonne September 18, 2014 at 2:29 PM you are so sweet Cas, thank you.

Tim Smith September 18, 2014 at 8:53 AM Outstanding my friend and then to finish it off with a Nonette .....brilliant my friend Maurice Yvonne September 18, 2014 at 2:29 PM thanks Tim.