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My Love Is Eternal

Oh, I weep your tragic death my love, for we thought we had a long future together; but, you left me suddenly for Heaven above, all because you crashed your car in bad weather; your essence drifted away a delicate fluttering feather. I have carried this deep sadness for so many years, wearing it each day like a heavy cloak of grief; putting on a mask of happiness to hide my tears, oh, Angel of Death came and took my love like a thief; I pray at night for peace, oh Lord is there no relief. And though my grief is forever - happiness I recall, and rise above the pain and with hand on heart I smile; at those times of joy both the big and the small, my love, I must move on and will not come for awhile; I want to improve my life and make each day worthwhile. __________________ October 9, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/My Love is Eternal Copyright Protected, ID 10-1396-194-09 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, With My Hand On My Heart sponsor, Mystic Rose Rose, Judged 10/25/2021

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Date: 10/11/2021 10:36:00 AM
"I have carried this deep sadness for so many years, wearing it each day like a heavy cloak of grief;" So sad and so well penned.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/11/2021 1:54:00 PM
Caren, thank you so much for the comment and the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/9/2021 12:15:00 PM
Hello Constance, your husband will always be with you in spirit. He is watching over you. Love & Serenity Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/10/2021 11:46:00 AM
Hello Constance, I am glad that you know he is with you. Tranquility & Peace Darlene
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Constance La France
Date: 10/9/2021 7:22:00 PM
Darlene, thank you for the visit and comment, yes, I know he is with me always ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/9/2021 8:54:00 AM
So sad, but so beautiful, too, Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/9/2021 8:59:00 AM
Milt, thanks for the visit and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

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