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My Love Has Gone

My time has come to shamelessly sightly see The seven seas sailed that have severed me For my love has gone beyond the spheres So I lay my night before the torrential tears Pacified pillows condemned carelessly cry Tainted windows that look thru amber sky The Wishing Wells as dry as daunting dust Broken hearts romantically remorse and rust Winds that whisper her name come forth So I may embrace her wandering warmth For my love has gone beyond the spheres Thus my soul is left yearning youthful years. June.21.2017 CONTEST no 300 ,PREMIERE,any form,any theme max of 25 lines Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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John Hamilton

Date: 7/8/2017 10:01:00 PM

A beauty of a write WW, with chopin you can't go wrong, and there is so much right with this piece of poetic melancholy. Fine work and I noticed your well placed signature alliteration also!

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/9/2017 8:40:00 AM

Thank you John...long time no hear my friend...hope all is OK...^WW^

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/4/2017 2:47:00 PM

A jewel is this poem for sure... A fav.. a soupmail on the way..

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/4/2017 3:28:00 PM

and thanks for heads up...^WW^

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/4/2017 2:51:00 PM

Thank you Robert...always nice to have you visit my friend...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2017 8:26:00 PM

this is so beautiful. I hope he gives you a win for it!

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/22/2017 11:04:00 PM

Thank you Andrea...because you read it, is a win for me...god bless...^WW^

Maria Williams

Date: 6/22/2017 3:47:00 AM

I grew up with Classical music as my Dad was the Lead violinist in several leading orchestras besides playing a host of instruments. Your Chopin brought back memories and your tribute completed the magnificent image of this musical and poetic tapestry. Thanks for the memories. A Fav...All the best with the contest...Maria

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/22/2017 8:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Maria...for your kind comment my friend...I love that particular piece...I can listen to Chopin for hours and the rest of the masters...what would poetry be without music and art...they are the holy trinities, second to the other holy trinity lol...god bless...^WW^

Akkina Downing

Date: 6/21/2017 9:44:00 PM

I love it!!!! Highs and lows of love :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/21/2017 9:45:00 PM

Thank you Akkina...god bless my friend...^WW^

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/21/2017 6:26:00 PM

to capture such fleeting moments in poetic verse gives justice to its passion, to add Chopin instills the sad reflection of the dance...bravo poet

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/21/2017 8:39:00 PM

Thank you kindly Frederic...always a hit with Chopin...take care my friend...^WW^

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/21/2017 5:15:00 PM

I agree with Charlie, WW You are quite the wordsmith. Sad but enjoyable read:)

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/21/2017 5:47:00 PM

There is an extra chair Danny and a glass my friend...care to join us...we can be the three poetic amigos lol...Thank you Daniel...to all the ladies at the soup...may our poetesses reign supreme...^WW^

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/21/2017 3:48:00 PM

"yearning youthful years" quite the way with words WW, loved the music too, all that's left is to pour a great glass of red...

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/21/2017 3:57:00 PM

Ah yes, the red nectar of the Gods I presume lol...pull up a chair Charlie and grab a glass my friend...to poetry soup!...thankx Charlie...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/21/2017 2:52:00 PM

- Your poem touches my heart with joy, beautiful W.W. - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/21/2017 2:58:00 PM

Thank so much Anne-Lise...you always bless us with your presence...(((hugs and smiles)))...^WW^

White Wolf

Date: 6/21/2017 2:04:00 PM

I always know that I am in for a great read when I come across your page, WW! You never let me down! Wonderful as always

White Wolf
Date: 6/21/2017 2:39:00 PM

The wolf is always with you, my friend /|\

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/21/2017 2:31:00 PM

Dido...Wolfie...you and I are from the same breed my friend...although many miles away...we have similar hearts and pen...you are a lightworker...I was told of are meeting...there are a few here among us...we even have the same avatar initials...that's why we resonate...god bless...^WW^

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/21/2017 12:40:00 PM

Oh What a beautiful poem you have written and beautiful song too. I love piano. Well done. Good luck in the contest. :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/21/2017 1:49:00 PM

Thank you Heidi...music and poetry...what else do we need?...maybe a pizza and icecream lol...god bless...^WW^

Lin Lane

Date: 6/21/2017 12:19:00 PM

Your whispering wind needs a change of direction so your soul will no longer yearn. Beautiful poetry, accompanied by a classic. Well done, ^WW^

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/21/2017 12:22:00 PM

Then what would be the point of writing poetry lol...no yearn -no learn lol...thank you so much my lady Lin...god bless...^WW^

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 6/21/2017 11:44:00 AM

This is beautiful. Nicely done. As an observation you might have an extra 'the' in your third line.

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/21/2017 12:05:00 PM

Thank you Dale...have corrected...god bless my friend...^WW^