Winged Warrior Poet Quatrain

My Love Has Gone

My time has come to shamelessly sightly see
The seven seas sailed that have severed me
For my love has gone beyond the spheres
So I lay my night before the torrential tears

Pacified pillows condemned carelessly cry
Tainted windows that look thru amber sky
The Wishing Wells as dry as daunting dust
Broken hearts romantically remorse and rust

Winds that whisper her name come forth
So I may embrace her wandering warmth
For my love has gone beyond the spheres
Thus my soul is left yearning youthful years.




June.21.2017
CONTEST no 300 ,PREMIERE,any form,any theme max of 25 lines
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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John Hamilton July 8, 2017 at 10:01 PM A beauty of a write WW, with chopin you can't go wrong, and there is so much right with this piece of poetic melancholy. Fine work and I noticed your well placed signature alliteration also! Winged Warrior July 9, 2017 at 8:40 AM Thank you John...long time no hear my friend...hope all is OK...^WW^

Robert Lindley July 4, 2017 at 2:47 PM A jewel is this poem for sure... A fav.. a soupmail on the way.. Winged Warrior July 4, 2017 at 3:28 PM and thanks for heads up...^WW^ Winged Warrior July 4, 2017 at 2:51 PM Thank you Robert...always nice to have you visit my friend...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2017 at 8:26 PM this is so beautiful. I hope he gives you a win for it! Winged Warrior June 22, 2017 at 11:04 PM Thank you Andrea...because you read it, is a win for me...god bless...^WW^

Maria Williams June 22, 2017 at 3:47 AM I grew up with Classical music as my Dad was the Lead violinist in several leading orchestras besides playing a host of instruments. Your Chopin brought back memories and your tribute completed the magnificent image of this musical and poetic tapestry. Thanks for the memories. A Fav...All the best with the contest...Maria Winged Warrior June 22, 2017 at 8:57 AM Thank you so much Maria...for your kind comment my friend...I love that particular piece...I can listen to Chopin for hours and the rest of the masters...what would poetry be without music and art...they are the holy trinities, second to the other holy trinity lol...god bless...^WW^

Akkina Downing June 21, 2017 at 9:44 PM I love it!!!! Highs and lows of love :) Winged Warrior June 21, 2017 at 9:45 PM Thank you Akkina...god bless my friend...^WW^

Frederic Parker June 21, 2017 at 6:26 PM to capture such fleeting moments in poetic verse gives justice to its passion, to add Chopin instills the sad reflection of the dance...bravo poet Winged Warrior June 21, 2017 at 8:39 PM Thank you kindly Frederic...always a hit with Chopin...take care my friend...^WW^

Daniel Turner June 21, 2017 at 5:15 PM I agree with Charlie, WW You are quite the wordsmith. Sad but enjoyable read:) Winged Warrior June 21, 2017 at 5:47 PM There is an extra chair Danny and a glass my friend...care to join us...we can be the three poetic amigos lol...Thank you Daniel...to all the ladies at the soup...may our poetesses reign supreme...^WW^

Charlie Smith June 21, 2017 at 3:48 PM "yearning youthful years" quite the way with words WW, loved the music too, all that's left is to pour a great glass of red... Winged Warrior June 21, 2017 at 3:57 PM Ah yes, the red nectar of the Gods I presume lol...pull up a chair Charlie and grab a glass my friend...to poetry soup!...thankx Charlie...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen June 21, 2017 at 2:52 PM - Your poem touches my heart with joy, beautiful W.W. - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Winged Warrior June 21, 2017 at 2:58 PM Thank so much Anne-Lise...you always bless us with your presence...(((hugs and smiles)))...^WW^

White Wolf June 21, 2017 at 2:04 PM I always know that I am in for a great read when I come across your page, WW! You never let me down! Wonderful as always White Wolf June 21, 2017 at 2:39 PM The wolf is always with you, my friend /|\ Winged Warrior June 21, 2017 at 2:31 PM Dido...Wolfie...you and I are from the same breed my friend...although many miles away...we have similar hearts and pen...you are a lightworker...I was told of are meeting...there are a few here among us...we even have the same avatar initials...that's why we resonate...god bless...^WW^

Heidi Sands June 21, 2017 at 12:40 PM Oh What a beautiful poem you have written and beautiful song too. I love piano. Well done. Good luck in the contest. :) Winged Warrior June 21, 2017 at 1:49 PM Thank you Heidi...music and poetry...what else do we need?...maybe a pizza and icecream lol...god bless...^WW^

Lin Lane June 21, 2017 at 12:19 PM Your whispering wind needs a change of direction so your soul will no longer yearn. Beautiful poetry, accompanied by a classic. Well done, ^WW^ Winged Warrior June 21, 2017 at 12:22 PM Then what would be the point of writing poetry lol...no yearn -no learn lol...thank you so much my lady Lin...god bless...^WW^

Dale Gregory Cozart June 21, 2017 at 11:44 AM This is beautiful. Nicely done. As an observation you might have an extra 'the' in your third line. Winged Warrior June 21, 2017 at 12:05 PM Thank you Dale...have corrected...god bless my friend...^WW^