My Love

My love for you will never fade Sure for you I'd bleed myself dry But I shall not let you cry Oh even if I die Tonight you'll be the love of my love Tomorrow you will still be You're perfect to me My love, can't you see? I love you I've always loved you I've always chosen you you just never chose me Hell, you don't even know I existed until now 01-01 It started A new year A new love cycle A new start and it all started with you sure you put me through hell once Forgave you I did Forget I cannot It's not a memory I like to keep But it's buried deep

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Skat A

Date: 7/10/2016 11:38:00 PM

JOCELYN, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. always **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/1/2016 8:17:00 AM

Jocelyn, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Moon Flower

Date: 7/1/2016 6:59:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Jocelyn. :)

Skat A

Date: 6/30/2016 9:49:00 PM

Jocelyn, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

Pam Deremer

Date: 6/30/2016 5:15:00 PM

A very nice poem.