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A good morning indeed...Woohoo (lol)

As I strayed into a dream and the world around me closed I dreamt I met this woman who wasn't wearing any clothes Her eyes were kind of hazel with lashes long and slim She had dimples on her face with a cleft deep in her chin Her lips were soft as pillows and the color of a rose Her hair was long and blonde; she had a perfect-looking nose Her voice was like a songbird; that was music to my ears Flowing off her cheeks was a river made of tears So I held her hand in mine and I flattered her with charm Then I pulled her very close to me and held her in my arms When I woke up from my dream with her dangling in my head The girl that I was dreaming of was lying in my bed She asked why I was smiling, what was I dreaming of So I whispered softly in her ear, "I dreamt of you, my love"

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Date: 5/16/2018 6:11:00 PM
Sweet little ending there, Charlie. (: "Flowing off her cheeks was a river made of tears " - awesome line. Always, Laura
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Date: 5/16/2018 10:44:00 AM
What a treat, Charles. A most delightful read - funny and most endearing. A lovely poem.
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/16/2018 10:58:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed this one, I am most grateful for the read and your kind winds. Have a wonderful day, Line, my dear friend...Charlie hugs
Date: 5/16/2018 9:26:00 AM
Lucky guy! What a beautiful romantic piece. You made me smile.
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/16/2018 10:25:00 AM
Thank you Richard, it’s nice to dream these dreams, every few days lol thanks for the read and kind words

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