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My Love, -Name-

Your skin glows like warm, silky milk chocolate, blossoms better than a rose in the purest hope of spring. My yearning heart rises to your comforting voice and leaps like a kitten at the whisper of your name, -name-. The evening ascends in on a great Blue Jay wing. I am calmed by your presence that I carry into the twilight of moonbeams and us holding each other hand-in-hand. I am filled with hope that I may dry your tears of sadness, happiness, and joy that are mixed together. As my mind wanders to my bank of memories, I remember the times you were wild with passion. In the hushed, I listen for the last chirp of the spring. My heated heart leaps to my chest. I wait in the crystal moonlight for you to show me your secret place you say has beauty beyond imagination, so that we may jump as one, heart to heart, in search of the glorious times and the spiritual tree of love. *Dedicated to the one with whom I fell inlove with...may you be blessed each day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/19/2010 11:52:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured this week, enjoy the honor and keep writing. Love, always Adeleke
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Date: 7/19/2010 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Brittany. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:31:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Jan
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Date: 6/3/2010 12:18:00 PM
You have me smiling with this one. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 6/3/2010 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Brittany. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2010 9:59:00 AM
Congrats Brittany on your poem making it to the first round of competition in Poetry Soup contest.. way to go ..good luck... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:48:00 AM
an exquisitely beautiful dedication, Brittany. Congratulations on your recognition in poetry of the week.-Robert
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Date: 5/12/2010 3:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured write this week Brittany. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2010 5:27:00 PM
Creative use of imagery for an interesting reflection on love. Nice dedication. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 5/10/2010 2:02:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/9/2010 2:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured on the Soups Homepage Brittany >> James
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Date: 3/16/2010 1:28:00 PM
Brittany, i love how you use nature in this lovely poem > a joy to read >> James
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Date: 12/13/2009 9:31:00 AM
Wonderful spiritual and love poem! I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing with us! Love, Florentina
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