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My Little Universe-Lexi's Personal Planet

MY LITTLE UNIVERSE—LEXI'S PERSONAL PLANET (Visual 1) Penned in a poetry permissive as a periwinkle painting palette’s passive paths to pain Petty philosophy added to phobias perils perishing peace in selfish pedantic prose Passing parodies of passion on paper permeate pacifying periodic paralysis, a paltry pardon Phoney photoflashes, the profound performance persist perfectly profound on my personal planet © Kim van Breda

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Mark Peterson

Date: 4/25/2014 10:57:00 PM

You've spun quite a web of riddles here with your with the explosive "P." A plethora of perspicacity.

Tim Smith

Date: 4/8/2014 2:16:00 PM

Perfectly penned poetry princess :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/8/2014 4:24:00 AM

- Thanks for letting me visit your "MY LITTLE UNIVERSE-MY PERSONAL PLANET" - Unique and beautiful, Kim!! - Always enjoyable to read your poems - Have a pleasant day - oxox // Anne-Lise:)