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Your hands are shaking Your face is sweating You look down and see the cars wizzing by You stand there ready to jump You think of all the darkness that is in your life All the fear All the anger All the hate That has been running your life In the back of your head You hear your parents yelling at you Telling you that you are a faliure You know that nobody cares about your feelings, all they care about is using you for your own personal gain You tell yourself that it will never happen again You close your eyes and say out loud "I LOVE YOU MORIAH" And jump..................

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Date: 11/26/2009 11:55:00 PM
We all feel these misconceptions from time to time. Love is not perfect here. God's love is . God is Love and knows all about and is all about what we are looking for. I've learned that the hard way which is how I learn everything it seems. The only place I jumped was down on my knees. And still do.Ask Him and you shall receive. Watch and see.keep on writing,Branden. Am saying one for you.-your friend in poetry. -Robert
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