Constance La France Poet Imagism

My Life

My life has taken me to places    deep
And, my reverie is painful and        fathomless
I paint my tragic journey with           words
Those I loved,  memories that              drip
My writes are weeping lines so                tangled
With my pen I bleed these sad                  poems
Over and over, and again and                      endlessly
With falling tears I write verses                      sorrowful

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July 29, 2015


Poetry/Free Verse/My Life
Copyright Protected, ID 15-695-722-0
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France


For the Standard contest, End Line Word
sponsor, HGarvey Daniel  Esquire, Judged 07/2015

Second Place

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Joyce Johnson November 8, 2015 at 6:54 PM Well executed Constance. Very nice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Constance La France November 8, 2015 at 7:34 PM Joyce, thank you so much for the congrats and the forever support ~

Sara Kendrick November 7, 2015 at 3:50 PM Congrats on your end line poem landing on the winners’ page..Way to go!!! Aren’t those end lines impressive..Sara..Creative lay out.. Constance La France November 8, 2015 at 7:34 PM Thank you Sara, if was a very inspiring contest for sure ~

Janice Canerdy November 5, 2015 at 8:23 PM Very impressive, Broken Wings! Congratulations Janice Constance La France November 5, 2015 at 10:32 PM Thanks so much Janice for the compliment and the congrats

Skat A November 5, 2015 at 12:14 PM Broken, a wonderful entry, Congratulations on your End Line Win. LOVE SKAT Constance La France November 5, 2015 at 3:35 PM Thank you for the congrats, Skat, appreciated

Anisha Dutta November 5, 2015 at 8:01 AM Excellent Poem. Congrats on your win. Anisha D Constance La France November 5, 2015 at 8:23 AM Thank you so much

Eve Roper November 5, 2015 at 12:03 AM Wonderful poem and a fantastic win! Constance La France November 5, 2015 at 12:47 AM Thank you Eve

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 4, 2015 at 10:45 PM Wonderful emotive write n win broken! Much deserved.. big congrats !! Constance La France November 4, 2015 at 11:34 PM Thank you Upma

Sandra Haight November 4, 2015 at 7:48 PM Deep and emotional write, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your well-deserved fine win. Hugs, Sandra Constance La France November 4, 2015 at 11:34 PM Thanks so much Sandra

Alexis Y. November 4, 2015 at 7:12 PM BW, you have penned a well written deep emotional write. Congratulations on your 2nd place win it was well deserved:-)Alexis Constance La France November 4, 2015 at 7:36 PM Thank you Alexis, I am thrilled with my win

Balveen Cheema November 4, 2015 at 11:58 AM Wings, as usual, a well deserving and emotional win! Balveen Constance La France November 4, 2015 at 1:09 PM Balveen thank you for your forever support of my poetry, so appreciated ~

Paul Callus November 4, 2015 at 11:25 AM Sad and sorrowful emotions bring out the best in poetry...such is this beautiful offering, Constance! Congratulations on a very worthy podium finish! Warm regards // paul Constance La France November 4, 2015 at 1:09 PM Paul, thank you so much for the beautiful comment and the congrats ~

Beautiful Scars November 4, 2015 at 11:11 AM What a fabulous poem! Congrats on your well deserved win Broken Wings!! :) Constance La France November 4, 2015 at 1:10 PM Thank you sweet Laura ~

Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2015 at 10:34 AM Beautiful! Congratulations. Constance La France November 4, 2015 at 1:11 PM Richard, thank you so much for the congrats ~

Mark Woods November 4, 2015 at 10:32 AM WOW this is brilliant congrats on your win, in what was a very difficult challenge. Constance La France November 4, 2015 at 1:12 PM Mark, thanks for the congrats, yes it was difficult, I had to play around with it for quite awhile to get it right ~

Neva Romaine November 4, 2015 at 10:25 AM Hey BW, PLEASE forgive my mistake. I was looking at the wrong contest in my comment. I extend my hearty congratulations to you on this amazing poem winning in the End Line Contest - and well deserved too! I am so glad that you placed so highly because it is truly a beautiful poem! Again, please forgive my mistake! Be Blessed, Neva Constance La France November 4, 2015 at 1:13 PM Neva, thank you so much for your congrats and your forever support of my poetry, so appreciated ~

Jan Allison November 4, 2015 at 10:10 AM so beautifully crafted Broken Wings - your pen may weep but the words although so often sad are so wonderful :-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France November 4, 2015 at 1:14 PM Jan, I am so happy with this placement, it was an emotional write for me and so wonderful to see it place high ~

Neva Romaine November 4, 2015 at 9:52 AM Hey BW, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem winning in the Screwed V11 contest! I love the way you penned this poem. Be Blessed, Neva Constance La France November 4, 2015 at 1:16 PM Neva, no problem I placed in the Screwed contest too.. so thanks Neva Romaine November 4, 2015 at 10:06 AM Hey BW, PLEASE forgive my mistake - I was looking at the wrong contest - I extend my hearty congratulations to you on this amazing poem winning in the End Line contest - and well deserved too! I am so glad that you placed so highly because it is truly a beautiful poem! Again, please forgive my mistake. Be Blessed, Neva

James Inman August 7, 2015 at 3:01 PM BW, BW, BW I have visited this poem several times, slowly savoring each word, and wrote several comments that I never posted. Hard to put into words how I feel, I've never seen perfection but this is as close as I've come. Unlike me who chooses to write, I think sometimes your need to write drives you. It's who you are. Deep, beautiful, emotional are only insignificant words when describing your poem. Constance La France November 4, 2015 at 1:20 PM Thank you for that beautiful comment, James, it truly touched my heart, you are right, I have a need to write that is beyond my control, so I write my sorrow, the words just drip from my pen and I won 2nd place in the contest ~

Eric Boddie July 30, 2015 at 12:19 PM for what you did here....I can only cheer....so very artful and unique....I am almost speechless to critique....wow....;) Constance La France November 4, 2015 at 1:18 PM Thanks Ian for that nice comment ~

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire July 30, 2015 at 10:39 AM Dear Broken Wings, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High In the Spirit. As soon as I read this Tapestry of POETRY I moved it to Round 2. I knew it was YOUR Trademark POETRY. You may want to talk to Ian about giving it another try as I asked him to try again. I LOVE YOU Constance ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry Constance La France November 4, 2015 at 1:17 PM Harry, thank you so much for my awesome win, I am over the moon thrilled ~

Leo Larry Amadore July 29, 2015 at 6:27 PM Bravo....an artful and clever accomplishment. I enjoyed reading this and I appreciated the visual appeal. Constance La France November 4, 2015 at 1:17 PM Thank you so much for the visit