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My Life

My life has taken me to places deep And, my reverie is painful and fathomless I paint my tragic journey with words Those I loved, memories that drip My writes are weeping lines so tangled With my pen I bleed these sad poems Over and over, and again and endlessly With falling tears I write verses sorrowful _________________________ July 29, 2015 Poetry/Free Verse/My Life Copyright Protected, ID 15-695-722-0 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France For the Standard contest, End Line Word sponsor, HGarvey Daniel Esquire, Judged 07/2015 Second Place

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Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/8/2015 6:54:00 PM

Well executed Constance. Very nice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Constance La France
Date: 11/8/2015 7:34:00 PM

Joyce, thank you so much for the congrats and the forever support ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2015 3:50:00 PM

Congrats on your end line poem landing on the winners’ page..Way to go!!! Aren’t those end lines impressive..Sara..Creative lay out..

Constance La France
Date: 11/8/2015 7:34:00 PM

Thank you Sara, if was a very inspiring contest for sure ~

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/5/2015 8:23:00 PM

Very impressive, Broken Wings! Congratulations Janice

Constance La France
Date: 11/5/2015 10:32:00 PM

Thanks so much Janice for the compliment and the congrats

Skat A

Date: 11/5/2015 12:14:00 PM

Broken, a wonderful entry, Congratulations on your End Line Win. LOVE SKAT

Constance La France
Date: 11/5/2015 3:35:00 PM

Thank you for the congrats, Skat, appreciated

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/5/2015 8:01:00 AM

Excellent Poem. Congrats on your win. Anisha D

Constance La France
Date: 11/5/2015 8:23:00 AM

Thank you so much

Eve Roper

Date: 11/5/2015 12:03:00 AM

Wonderful poem and a fantastic win!

Constance La France
Date: 11/5/2015 12:47:00 AM

Thank you Eve

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/4/2015 10:45:00 PM

Wonderful emotive write n win broken! Much deserved.. big congrats !!

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2015 11:34:00 PM

Thank you Upma

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/4/2015 7:48:00 PM

Deep and emotional write, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your well-deserved fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2015 11:34:00 PM

Thanks so much Sandra

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/4/2015 7:12:00 PM

BW, you have penned a well written deep emotional write. Congratulations on your 2nd place win it was well deserved:-)Alexis

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2015 7:36:00 PM

Thank you Alexis, I am thrilled with my win

Balveen Cheema

Date: 11/4/2015 11:58:00 AM

Wings, as usual, a well deserving and emotional win! Balveen

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2015 1:09:00 PM

Balveen thank you for your forever support of my poetry, so appreciated ~

Paul Callus

Date: 11/4/2015 11:25:00 AM

Sad and sorrowful emotions bring out the best in poetry...such is this beautiful offering, Constance! Congratulations on a very worthy podium finish! Warm regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2015 1:09:00 PM

Paul, thank you so much for the beautiful comment and the congrats ~

Lu Loo

Date: 11/4/2015 11:11:00 AM

What a fabulous poem! Congrats on your well deserved win Broken Wings!! :)

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2015 1:10:00 PM

Thank you sweet Laura ~

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/4/2015 10:34:00 AM

Beautiful! Congratulations.

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2015 1:11:00 PM

Richard, thank you so much for the congrats ~

Mark Woods

Date: 11/4/2015 10:32:00 AM

WOW this is brilliant congrats on your win, in what was a very difficult challenge.

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2015 1:12:00 PM

Mark, thanks for the congrats, yes it was difficult, I had to play around with it for quite awhile to get it right ~

Neva Romaine

Date: 11/4/2015 10:25:00 AM

Hey BW, PLEASE forgive my mistake. I was looking at the wrong contest in my comment. I extend my hearty congratulations to you on this amazing poem winning in the End Line Contest - and well deserved too! I am so glad that you placed so highly because it is truly a beautiful poem! Again, please forgive my mistake! Be Blessed, Neva

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2015 1:13:00 PM

Neva, thank you so much for your congrats and your forever support of my poetry, so appreciated ~

Jan Allison

Date: 11/4/2015 10:10:00 AM

so beautifully crafted Broken Wings - your pen may weep but the words although so often sad are so wonderful :-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2015 1:14:00 PM

Jan, I am so happy with this placement, it was an emotional write for me and so wonderful to see it place high ~

Neva Romaine

Date: 11/4/2015 9:52:00 AM

Hey BW, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem winning in the Screwed V11 contest! I love the way you penned this poem. Be Blessed, Neva

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2015 1:16:00 PM

Neva, no problem I placed in the Screwed contest too.. so thanks

Neva Romaine
Date: 11/4/2015 10:06:00 AM

Hey BW, PLEASE forgive my mistake - I was looking at the wrong contest - I extend my hearty congratulations to you on this amazing poem winning in the End Line contest - and well deserved too! I am so glad that you placed so highly because it is truly a beautiful poem! Again, please forgive my mistake. Be Blessed, Neva

James Inman

Date: 8/7/2015 3:01:00 PM

BW, BW, BW I have visited this poem several times, slowly savoring each word, and wrote several comments that I never posted. Hard to put into words how I feel, I've never seen perfection but this is as close as I've come. Unlike me who chooses to write, I think sometimes your need to write drives you. It's who you are. Deep, beautiful, emotional are only insignificant words when describing your poem.

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2015 1:20:00 PM

Thank you for that beautiful comment, James, it truly touched my heart, you are right, I have a need to write that is beyond my control, so I write my sorrow, the words just drip from my pen and I won 2nd place in the contest ~

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/30/2015 12:19:00 PM

for what you did here....I can only cheer....so very artful and unique....I am almost speechless to critique....wow....;)

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2015 1:18:00 PM

Thanks Ian for that nice comment ~

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 7/30/2015 10:39:00 AM

Dear Broken Wings, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High In the Spirit. As soon as I read this Tapestry of POETRY I moved it to Round 2. I knew it was YOUR Trademark POETRY. You may want to talk to Ian about giving it another try as I asked him to try again. I LOVE YOU Constance ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2015 1:17:00 PM

Harry, thank you so much for my awesome win, I am over the moon thrilled ~

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 7/29/2015 6:27:00 PM

Bravo....an artful and clever accomplishment. I enjoyed reading this and I appreciated the visual appeal.

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2015 1:17:00 PM

Thank you so much for the visit