My Last Ounce of Energy

I've used up every last ounce of energy I've got... Comes a gentle knock on my ego 'No, you have not'

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/15/2023 1:22:00 AM

Lol, keep going Gershon, never give up. Tom

Karen Jones

Date: 12/15/2023 12:10:00 AM

Lol. Love this

John Lawless

Date: 12/14/2023 8:45:00 PM

don't ya just hate that "just five more ...." voice echoing in the caverns of collapse

Edward Ebbs

Date: 12/14/2023 8:26:00 PM

I understand the loss of energy. When I was a rugby player and thought I was immortal, I was full of energy. That was well over 30 years ago. I have been humbled so many times since...the energy has been spent. Thank you for sharing, Ed

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/14/2023 8:38:00 PM

Heh-heh. I hear you loud and clear, Edward. That feeling of immortality really exists, and then - poof, it's gone. There's a poem in there for you or me, or for both of us. ~ Here's to bygones,... but let them be bygones as we bravely keep putting one foot in front of the other... Faith and Strength, Gershon