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My Last Lost Love This is an elegy to my last lost love, whom sleeps with the stars in the heavens above. The sound of your voice still titillates my ears, even though you’ve been dead for several years. Labelle’s ballad brings back dreams I once had, and even in their melody, the joys were sad. You possessed excitement that could not be named, but with it a heartache of deep rooted pain. You seemed to know that I wanted you so. Soon you were here and soon you would go. If the phone rings late, it’s a call from the veil, as we know through death, love can assail. Release me from infatuation’s grasp. How can it in a woman’s mind still last? Today someone new has come around. Will the passion of youth again be found? There's nothing better for a broken heart, than for a fresh love to impart. He’s not like you. I’m sure of that. By him I can see, you didn't love me back. 2/7/17

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Date: 3/28/2017 8:39:00 AM
Congrats for your WIN with this fine piece, Jan!! ;-)
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Date: 2/16/2017 5:44:00 PM
Oh Janis!! How beautifully done!! I like this!! Well done and congratulations!!! Big Hugggs. Deb
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Janis Thompson
Date: 3/21/2017 11:07:00 PM
Thanks Deb.
Date: 2/14/2017 8:46:00 AM
Great write, great message. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 2/14/2017 1:21:00 PM
Thanks, Kai. Enjoy your travels.
Date: 2/14/2017 5:37:00 AM
At the drop of last words, she now sees clearly, that her love was not real! Congrats, Janice!
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Date: 2/14/2017 1:22:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. Your comments are always appreciated.
Date: 2/13/2017 5:32:00 PM
Great write, and I like the twist at the end that gave it a different direction. Congrats on your win, Janis.
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Date: 2/14/2017 1:23:00 PM
Thanks, Agnes. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 2/13/2017 5:25:00 PM
Powerful lines, especially the last 4 - they tie the sentiment and the content together in exactly the right tone. Congrats!
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Date: 2/14/2017 1:24:00 PM
Thanks, Phillip. I really appreciate your taking the time to comment.
Date: 2/9/2017 8:09:00 PM
I'm applauding, now bowing! Outstanding ... CayCay
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/10/2017 5:59:00 PM
Thanks CayCay. Glad to know you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/7/2017 10:46:00 PM
Sounds like a Love revelation, great write!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/9/2017 5:31:00 PM
Thanks, James.
Date: 2/7/2017 2:41:00 PM
The twist at the end was excellent, Janis! Expressive couplets and wonderful love poem of love lost! A big 7 from me :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/7/2017 8:49:00 PM
Thanks, Laura. I appreciate your stopping by.

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