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My Last Hour

My last hour will be selfish Silly songs, souveniers of mmmbops Even the distortion will distort So what if the neighbours complain. They just need patience I won't be long. I'll pee in the local swimming pool It can be my legacy I'll phone random people in Hong Kong And reincarnate into a fly on the wall To watch the faces of my phone bill providers When they realise I won't be paying this month. I'll pluck up the courage to tell you That I love you, always only you I'll not pay for my groceries. I can't be imprisoned now. I'm as free as I'll ever be I've seen all I'll ever need 20 July 2011

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Date: 8/15/2011 12:07:00 PM
great one, jodie.. my sweet congrats on your fine win! :) huggs
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Date: 8/15/2011 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Robb's contest Jodie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2011 1:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/14/2011 11:16:00 PM
Congrats Jodie on your big win in last hour contest with this tremendous write luv..
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Date: 7/20/2011 7:54:00 AM
gritty, tender write, jodie... a wow for the contest; why didn't i think of peeing for ,y own piece, lol... winning's best to you! :) huggs, nette
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