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My Last Goodbye

My Last Good bye I tried so hard to understand you I gave it everything I had But nothing seemed to make a difference All that I found just made me sad I never thought that we'd be over I really gave it all I had No matter how I tried to fix things Nothing would work it all turned bad Love is over now Love is over Love is over now Love is over We really had a lot to rescue We shared good times over the years But all we do is shout and argue Bringing me bitterness and tears I'm moving on now I can't take this At least I know that I did try You couldn't meet me in the middle So this will be my last goodbye Love is over now Love is over Love is over now Love is over This is my last farewell I promise I won't cry Close the door when I've gone This is my last goodbye Love is over now Love is over Love is over now Love is over Jane Shields (C)

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Date: 12/4/2017 7:18:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, incomplete love is always very sad and always bring tears to our eyes, no matter what we did, we always think about that person,a thing I learned is that we should give our best but once if our partner push up then it s best to simply go away thinking that we had given our best, anyway i also have a similar poem, losing my first love, I ll really appreciate if you could find time to read my poem and let me know how it is
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Jane Shields
Date: 12/4/2017 9:53:00 AM
Please sen me a link and I will gladly read it. Thank you for your kind comment. xx

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